for Into the Miasma4/3/2017 c13 Selenay Of Antioch
I love this, all that you've worked so hard on. thank you for sharing this with us!
I love this, all that you've worked so hard on. thank you for sharing this with us!
4/3/2017 c13 YourrrsTruly
Yesss! Another great chapter! I can't wait to find out who this Undoer is, what he's going to do and what that means for everyone. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Yesss! Another great chapter! I can't wait to find out who this Undoer is, what he's going to do and what that means for everyone. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
4/2/2017 c13 Kactuskat16
Interesting dynamic between the characters! Loved it! I can't wait for the next update!
Interesting dynamic between the characters! Loved it! I can't wait for the next update!
4/2/2017 c13 Tay
Ugh, sorry I've missed the last few reviews; I have been reading, though! I am loving the progression and how you're not lingering on minute details. Things have been tying in nicely, and I can't wait to get into the present!
Ugh, sorry I've missed the last few reviews; I have been reading, though! I am loving the progression and how you're not lingering on minute details. Things have been tying in nicely, and I can't wait to get into the present!
3/31/2017 c13 
2Baoh joestar
Well that was tense and really liked how yukina did not backed down, he really owed her a explanation. Good chapter.
2Baoh joestarWell that was tense and really liked how yukina did not backed down, he really owed her a explanation. Good chapter.
3/20/2017 c12 sesshomarusdancer
Gah another plant affinity! I am loving the pace right now. It tells me, hopefully, that you are leading up to something awesome soon. Thank the Lord for Shizuru and her blunt attitude. More soon! Thank you thank you thank you for the special shout out. You're amazing!
Gah another plant affinity! I am loving the pace right now. It tells me, hopefully, that you are leading up to something awesome soon. Thank the Lord for Shizuru and her blunt attitude. More soon! Thank you thank you thank you for the special shout out. You're amazing!
3/19/2017 c12 Kactuskat16
Garasuke has his father's powers! Really looking forward to seeing this development play out. Guess this means their little family won't be safe for very long.
The story is moving at a great pace for me. I absolutely love your stories! Your OC is so great, thank you for putting so much work into her! Really looking forward to the next chapter!
Garasuke has his father's powers! Really looking forward to seeing this development play out. Guess this means their little family won't be safe for very long.
The story is moving at a great pace for me. I absolutely love your stories! Your OC is so great, thank you for putting so much work into her! Really looking forward to the next chapter!
3/9/2017 c11 sesshomarusdancer
Oh sweet baby Jesus, I can't believe I caught up to you in this story! Now I'm stuck waiting for an update. I so hope you update soon. While I'm not saying I like mental illness, I do like where you're taking it. Most people make things so happy go lucky in stories, this is so real and possible in life. I work as a receptionist at a mental health clinic here in Florida, so I see it daily. I'm completely enthralled in this story, so please give us more of this heart wrenching trilogy soon!
Oh sweet baby Jesus, I can't believe I caught up to you in this story! Now I'm stuck waiting for an update. I so hope you update soon. While I'm not saying I like mental illness, I do like where you're taking it. Most people make things so happy go lucky in stories, this is so real and possible in life. I work as a receptionist at a mental health clinic here in Florida, so I see it daily. I'm completely enthralled in this story, so please give us more of this heart wrenching trilogy soon!
3/7/2017 c6 sesshomarusdancer
Yusuke calls him Kurama at the beginning of the ceremony and a paragraph or two later there is a parenthetical explaining how he has to call him Shuichi due to present company! Sorry, my continuity monster goes ocd sometimes. Lol! I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I am still thoroughly enjoying this story!
Yusuke calls him Kurama at the beginning of the ceremony and a paragraph or two later there is a parenthetical explaining how he has to call him Shuichi due to present company! Sorry, my continuity monster goes ocd sometimes. Lol! I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I am still thoroughly enjoying this story!
2/18/2017 c11 Kactuskat16
As someone who was diagnosed with GAD, I can relate to that feeling of anxiety. It can be really overwhelming sometimes. I feel like you touched upon it very well in the story.
It was a great chapter, really enjoyed the moments the characters had with Gara. Cute name, by the way! Will we see how Jien, Chu and Touya (ect) react to the baby? I imagine Reina slightly freaking out when Chu, enormous as he is, holds the baby, hah!
Thanks for keeping dedicated to bringing this awesome story to us! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
As someone who was diagnosed with GAD, I can relate to that feeling of anxiety. It can be really overwhelming sometimes. I feel like you touched upon it very well in the story.
It was a great chapter, really enjoyed the moments the characters had with Gara. Cute name, by the way! Will we see how Jien, Chu and Touya (ect) react to the baby? I imagine Reina slightly freaking out when Chu, enormous as he is, holds the baby, hah!
Thanks for keeping dedicated to bringing this awesome story to us! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
2/13/2017 c11 2Selenay Of Antioch
Oh! Gara! I know a lot about how she felt, going through that. I think you've really portrayed it accurately. thank you! I am grateful and I love the update. it's great to see the flash forwards as it all unfolds into the middle.
2Selenay Of AntiochOh! Gara! I know a lot about how she felt, going through that. I think you've really portrayed it accurately. thank you! I am grateful and I love the update. it's great to see the flash forwards as it all unfolds into the middle.