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7/28/2015 c6 5YuYuHakushoObsesser
"Pregnant lady says whaaaa...?" OMG! It was so hard to keep from laughing out loud at work XD LOL That was hilarious! Yuske was brilliant! I loved it and can't wait for more! :)
7/28/2015 c6 Emzybubble
Floating on a cloud of fluff right now..after all they've been through WTD and ATG nawww super cute :D
7/27/2015 c6 Tay
Awesome chapter! The wedding scene was very detailed and adorable! And it's okay! I start grad school in a month here, so I know what you mean! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
7/27/2015 c6 2Baoh joestar
Another Good chapter.
7/27/2015 c6 3Catharina M
Aww, this was so heartwarming and endearing! It's official - they're married! I'm so happy we get a break from the drama for a little bit and these two can have a little moment of peace and rest. I'm sure things will pick up soon though. Oh, man. Kuronue, poor baby. I hope he comes around soon. Get things figured out. I loved the bit with Chu, Touya and Jin! Learning multiple languages - HUMAN languages! - is so cute on these demons. Great chapter! I hope all is well with grad school and work! :)
6/30/2015 c5 Catharina M
Oh man oh man oh man. She's pregnant! I can't wait to see those two act all parental. It's going to be so stinkin' cute - both ups and downs. I'm just a cruel reader that way, enjoying their roller coaster of a lifetime.

As for Kuronue, it makes more sense now to see why he's refused visitations to the gang in Ningenkai. I mean, he wasn't returned to the world as a babe, you know? He's thrown back in the same way he left, except so much time has passed so he's definitely way out of the loop. Of course, he had some time to adjust while playing ghost with Reina, but it's still different because he has an actual body now. I think.. Kuro's having an identity crisis. The Kurama he used to know is no longer a bandit, he's now living /domestically/ of all things, there's no thieving around and meaningless one-night-stands (or his attempt to, in this case, considering he mentioned 'almost hook up') aren't helping him find where to ground himself.

As to why he's taking it out on poor Reina and how she isn't actually happy (or so he thinks), maybe it's because Kuro finds himself resonating with Reina. I haven't given it much thought, so I'd have to get back to you on that later. But all in all, poor Kuro. I have this urge of having another female OC just coming to comfort Kuro - kick his head out of his ass to straighten him out a little, then just love on him, and he'll be ever grateful for her who's just there for him. *shrugs* My mind wanders, woops. haha! Until next time! 3
6/4/2015 c1 2Selenay Of Antioch
This has beena wonderful series, and I'm excited to get to read the next chapters, too!
6/1/2015 c5 Tay
Oh, lots of drama coming up! I love it! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon please! :D
5/30/2015 c5 Ashley
I got a wild hair up my ass and decided to watch Yu Yu Hakusho not too long ago. Then, I decided to read fanfictions again. (I used to have a profile on here but it's been FAR TOO LONG, hence the review under my guest name.) I have to say, all three of your stories have been so amazing. I was glued to them all day and it took me about four days to get to this point in the series. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed more often, but I was too into the stories! I cannot wait for the updates, keep it up! And thank you so much for the great stories again.
5/29/2015 c5 xenocanaan
I wonder why Kuronue is so upset. Can't wait for the next chapter!
5/26/2015 c5 Kactuskat16
I'm not going to lie, I was shaking while waiting to find out whether Reina was pregnant or not. Thanks for that emotional roller coaster, wow!

As always, I loved every bit you throw in; especially Jin and the gang. Gotta love Jin! And damn, Kuronue.
Is he jealous? Because that's really what it's seeming like, hah! Poor guy. Maybe he's just realizing the price of mortality.

I wish you luck with school and work! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
5/25/2015 c5 2Baoh joestar
A little slow but a Good chapter. I wonder what the spiritual part has to do with your story.
5/23/2015 c5 2Kitsune Kiyoko
Kuronue is just insanely jealous. But maybe hasn't fully realized it yet. Maybe a little drama at the shot gun wedding in the works. But I'm happy that there was a little one on the way so cute. Can't wait for more. :) see you next time!
5/23/2015 c5 Jessenia22
OMG! Finally! So love this chapter made my day! :D Good luck with undergrad, I understand about studying I'm about to be in my second semester of nursing school and it suck! But I just have 6 more months to go and then I'm free from torture. lol
5/21/2015 c5 17Beryl Bloodstone
Whoo, boy! Of course, I still love you. Just keep on truckin', teez! I've been busy myself, what with doing work with my Portfolio and being one quarter away from graduating!

I imagine Reina's dad giving Kurama the meanest look once they deliver the news. Shiori just might faint from the elation.

Ugh, I totally sympathize with Kuronue, but he needs to not be such a sourpuss and take his pretty bat butt over to Ningenkai. I understand, though (I think)...he feels that they're moving too fast for him, while he seems to stand still. Haha, for some reason, I imagined some perky yet assertive demoness giving him advice like that. It seems to me that Kuronue is so worried about being left behind by Reina and Kurama that he's willing to alienate himself from them so he won't have to deal with all the hurts.

Excellent chapter, as always. Until we type again!
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