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4/15/2019 c10 3ThinMintE
Just so you know, chapter 10 is for your Pokémon fanfic. You accidentally posted the wrong chapter there.
2/18/2019 c1 6Lady Selan
So far I've only had time to read the first chapter. I think your story has some potential and I'm interested to see where it goes. I like seeing Link, Zelda and Midna all interact together, and I think you're setting up an interesting premise for the plot.

That being said, I really think (based on my first impression) that your story would benefit from having a beta reader or fresh set of eyes look over it. There are several grammatical and sentence structure errors which are a bit off-putting as I'm only into your first chapter. I think if you fix those then you could potentially have a great fic.

These are just my suggestions of course, and all I can say is keep writing and practicing. There is not a single person on here who doesn't have areas to improve on. Best of luck!

-Selan
7/10/2016 c1 Guest
Wow! 6 chapters, 13,903 words, and 1 review? Damn, you suck so bad!
7/10/2016 c3 Guest
Wrong story, dumbass!
1/2/2015 c1 114Finvarra Faerie
I thought this was good. It's interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest. Good job on this, writer.

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