for Blindness9h c9 RK
ok this chapter makes up for the complaints i had last chapter
ok this chapter makes up for the complaints i had last chapter
9h c9 RK
ngl i hope harry dies for the sheer stupidity of springing a trap intentionaly
how it should have gone: harry either warns and nevile doesnt believe him and dies OR he believes and they go out together
ngl i hope harry dies for the sheer stupidity of springing a trap intentionaly
how it should have gone: harry either warns and nevile doesnt believe him and dies OR he believes and they go out together
12h c6 RK
dumbles: lets put the triwizard tournament back up it will improve our standing
2 seconds later
dumbles: what happens at hogwarts shouldnt afect the minstery (standing)
a true politician
dumbles: lets put the triwizard tournament back up it will improve our standing
2 seconds later
dumbles: what happens at hogwarts shouldnt afect the minstery (standing)
a true politician
20h c4 RK
the stutter is incredibly anoying to read, i hope that it sort of gets implied she stutters without it actualy beeing shown all the time
otherwise hermy becomes an unlikeable char just from the "sound" of her voice
the stutter is incredibly anoying to read, i hope that it sort of gets implied she stutters without it actualy beeing shown all the time
otherwise hermy becomes an unlikeable char just from the "sound" of her voice
5/9 c2 fancyspinner
Having magic would make blindness easier. I have been blind all of my life and the way that you write hairy utilizing his magic. Makes me very happy.
Having magic would make blindness easier. I have been blind all of my life and the way that you write hairy utilizing his magic. Makes me very happy.
5/7 c6 Jiro
Harry being called in the goblet feels forced. They dont have his magical signature on file nor any parchment with his name personally written so it shouldnt have been possible
Harry being called in the goblet feels forced. They dont have his magical signature on file nor any parchment with his name personally written so it shouldnt have been possible
5/5 c35 
1mistofyourlove
It is everything. I don't think I'll find words to explain it in ever, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart you wrote this and created it and gave this book so much love. I am an author myself and I know what it takes to write and I would not say anything about the last note because I probably will be making assumptions or even if they are right it's not my place to say something. You're right. I could complain but I don't understand the pain and it would be inconsiderate and as I said, not my place. Thank you so much for writing this.
1mistofyourloveIt is everything. I don't think I'll find words to explain it in ever, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart you wrote this and created it and gave this book so much love. I am an author myself and I know what it takes to write and I would not say anything about the last note because I probably will be making assumptions or even if they are right it's not my place to say something. You're right. I could complain but I don't understand the pain and it would be inconsiderate and as I said, not my place. Thank you so much for writing this.
4/11 c38 Sebsam
Wonderful. Just finishing it. Great plot twist and beautifully flowing story.
I particularly love the way that you describe the world around and the characters that you modified a little bit but, just enough, to still have the feelings that we know then.
Thanks you for all your time and effort that you put inside this story.
Wonderful. Just finishing it. Great plot twist and beautifully flowing story.
I particularly love the way that you describe the world around and the characters that you modified a little bit but, just enough, to still have the feelings that we know then.
Thanks you for all your time and effort that you put inside this story.
4/3 c38 Guest
I haven't been on in near a decade now, but I saw a recommendation for this this work and it brought me back. It's beautiful and sprawling in its length, so, so beautiful. There's an immense amount of love out into the writing and it does such a wonderful job of portraying the wonder of magic from the smallest things up to the very largest in its world, and Harry's place as a lynchpin of it whether he likes it or not. The relationships are touching and the plots build together compellingly, and the amount of compassion is staggering. The end is heartbreaking in the best way. It's not an unhappy ending, but things are changed.
I haven't been on in near a decade now, but I saw a recommendation for this this work and it brought me back. It's beautiful and sprawling in its length, so, so beautiful. There's an immense amount of love out into the writing and it does such a wonderful job of portraying the wonder of magic from the smallest things up to the very largest in its world, and Harry's place as a lynchpin of it whether he likes it or not. The relationships are touching and the plots build together compellingly, and the amount of compassion is staggering. The end is heartbreaking in the best way. It's not an unhappy ending, but things are changed.
3/31 c38 10Fabianadat
Esse mundo das fanfics nunca deixa de surpreender, e quando tropeço em pérolas com está sua história eu relembro por que sempre volto em busca de outros contos e histórias.
Foi um imenso prazer ler suas palavras. Obrigado. ️
10FabianadatEsse mundo das fanfics nunca deixa de surpreender, e quando tropeço em pérolas com está sua história eu relembro por que sempre volto em busca de outros contos e histórias.
Foi um imenso prazer ler suas palavras. Obrigado. ️
3/9 c8 king4aday67
I swear to everything magic Worthy if Hermione ends up dying in the graveyard we will come after you with bricks
I swear to everything magic Worthy if Hermione ends up dying in the graveyard we will come after you with bricks
3/5 c22 peggy77
I am pretty sure I know who these 'inventors' are going to be.
Interesting OOC on Draco and why he's OOC. Actually quite believable.
I am pretty sure I know who these 'inventors' are going to be.
Interesting OOC on Draco and why he's OOC. Actually quite believable.