for Blindness11/25 c38 tux51512
I started reading this many years ago, buy at the time I found it really heavy and I couldn't finish it. Now that I did, I find that it was not as heavy as I remember, instead it was a ride, a beautiful and amazing one at that.
I figure that when I initially found this story, I wasn't ready, but now I'm glad I got to finally welcome it like an old friend.
I started reading this many years ago, buy at the time I found it really heavy and I couldn't finish it. Now that I did, I find that it was not as heavy as I remember, instead it was a ride, a beautiful and amazing one at that.
I figure that when I initially found this story, I wasn't ready, but now I'm glad I got to finally welcome it like an old friend.
11/22 c38 Guest
I thought that him going back to the scene of the attack was for him to see his unborn kid pattern so he could save him/her... his change was more thorough than i understood it.
As he said that he didn't care... i felt as if he was dead inside.
I thought that him going back to the scene of the attack was for him to see his unborn kid pattern so he could save him/her... his change was more thorough than i understood it.
As he said that he didn't care... i felt as if he was dead inside.
11/18 c1 Swarma
i never knew i needed a kind petunia fic until i started this. really excited to see where it goes!
i never knew i needed a kind petunia fic until i started this. really excited to see where it goes!
11/6 c38 atrociouslypedantic
This whole journey was amazing. Really good worldbuilding for the AU. You delved a lot deeper into magic and the structure of the wizarding world. Your style was perfect. Just really well-written.
This whole journey was amazing. Really good worldbuilding for the AU. You delved a lot deeper into magic and the structure of the wizarding world. Your style was perfect. Just really well-written.
11/5 c8 Smokeing
I'm not a very good reviewr. I know when i like a story an i like this one. Thank you.
I'm not a very good reviewr. I know when i like a story an i like this one. Thank you.
10/22 c38 LydiaCrazzy
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Blindness," and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a visually compelling comic book.
As a professional comic artist, I would love to collaborate with you to bring your vision to life as a fully illustrated comic. This project would be commission-based, and I would work closely with you to ensure that every page captures the essence of your story.
If this opportunity excites you, I’d be happy to discuss the process in more detail, including pricing, timelines, and any creative ideas you have in mind.
Please feel free to reach out to me via any of the following:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail . com
Thank you for considering this collaboration. I look forward to the possibility of working together to create something truly extraordinary!
Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
Hello,
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Blindness," and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a visually compelling comic book.
As a professional comic artist, I would love to collaborate with you to bring your vision to life as a fully illustrated comic. This project would be commission-based, and I would work closely with you to ensure that every page captures the essence of your story.
If this opportunity excites you, I’d be happy to discuss the process in more detail, including pricing, timelines, and any creative ideas you have in mind.
Please feel free to reach out to me via any of the following:
Discord: lydiacrazy
Instagram: lydiacrazy1
Email: lydiacrazy88 gmail . com
Thank you for considering this collaboration. I look forward to the possibility of working together to create something truly extraordinary!
Best regards,
Lydia Crazy
Professional Commission Comic Artist
10/20 c1 Guest
Hounoku — Today at 17:18
Guys do not say gaymar and replace the gay part with cred
Worst mistake of my life
Very cute Hounoku. Very cute ;)
Fortunately I'm not some faggot gay latino or some shit skinned turd worlder as Mahogany mentioned. Imagine being one, born into a shithole family with shithole beliefs and shithole ideals its no wonder that many latinos and black niggers and slant eyed chink face Chinese could never hope to assimilate into American culture to achieve the coveted American dream. Instead I see these scum as nothing more than a waste of oxygen and as infiltrators like wannabe spies that will soon disappear when Trump gets into power. Alternatively if the author of Summoning America, Sebastian Lee were to run for President I'd vote for him in a heartbeat since in the story there are no blacks niggers gays homosexuals trannies Muzzies and Jews ruining America by staining the white genepool with their inferior genes. The only honorable brown skinned turd I respect is Peconigiri since he is helping me identify people who slander DrDoritosMD's work from afar like the cowards they are. So far I am able to determine that most of them live in the turd world and at least one lives in some shithole called Jogjakarta or some shit name its so easy to bribe with the superior dollar compared to the rupee curee fag currency they use. The Dutch should've exterminated everyone except for Peconigir's lineage because it is clear people like him and Gomrade are honorary Americans for how they carry themselves. Its okay when the Chinks led by winnie the pooh declare war we will let the turd world be exterminated by AliExpress nukes and then with the slate clean the white race can finally reclaim our lost and rightful home to expand.
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Hounoku — Today at 17:18
Guys do not say gaymar and replace the gay part with cred
Worst mistake of my life
Very cute Hounoku. Very cute ;)
Fortunately I'm not some faggot gay latino or some shit skinned turd worlder as Mahogany mentioned. Imagine being one, born into a shithole family with shithole beliefs and shithole ideals its no wonder that many latinos and black niggers and slant eyed chink face Chinese could never hope to assimilate into American culture to achieve the coveted American dream. Instead I see these scum as nothing more than a waste of oxygen and as infiltrators like wannabe spies that will soon disappear when Trump gets into power. Alternatively if the author of Summoning America, Sebastian Lee were to run for President I'd vote for him in a heartbeat since in the story there are no blacks niggers gays homosexuals trannies Muzzies and Jews ruining America by staining the white genepool with their inferior genes. The only honorable brown skinned turd I respect is Peconigiri since he is helping me identify people who slander DrDoritosMD's work from afar like the cowards they are. So far I am able to determine that most of them live in the turd world and at least one lives in some shithole called Jogjakarta or some shit name its so easy to bribe with the superior dollar compared to the rupee curee fag currency they use. The Dutch should've exterminated everyone except for Peconigir's lineage because it is clear people like him and Gomrade are honorary Americans for how they carry themselves. Its okay when the Chinks led by winnie the pooh declare war we will let the turd world be exterminated by AliExpress nukes and then with the slate clean the white race can finally reclaim our lost and rightful home to expand.
**Manifest Fantasy on Royal Road – A Step Toward Bestselling Glory!**
Hello, Fantasy Fans and Readers,
We’re excited to share some thrilling news about "Manifest Fantasy," the captivating tale by the talented DrDoritosMD! This engaging adventure is gaining momentum on Royal Road, and we’d like to take a moment to reflect on its remarkable journey and promising future!
In "Manifest Fantasy," Captain Henry Donnager's unassuming role at Area 51 takes an unexpected twist when a test inadvertently opens a portal to a realm filled with knights, magic, and political intrigue. Leading Alpha Team, he must navigate a complex web of politics and powerful sorcery while balancing his own world’s cutting-edge technology with the ancient secrets of this new land. Can they unveil the mysteries of this enchanting world before rival factions clash?
As we celebrate this exciting milestone, we are also delighted to announce that DrDoritosMD is on the brink of finalizing a publishing deal! This brings us one step closer to sharing "Manifest Fantasy" with an even larger audience, and we genuinely believe it has the potential to become a bestseller. With its intricate world-building, thrilling quests, and memorable characters, this tale is truly one to embrace.
Join us in supporting DrDoritosMD as we look forward to a future where "Manifest Fantasy" can enchant readers across the globe. Dive into this adventure on Royal Road today, and let’s make this journey an unforgettable one together!
Happy reading!
Explore the story here: fiction/75057/manifest-fantasy?sortingoldest
Support the author through these links:
Patreon - drdoritosmd
Twitch - .tv/drdoritosmd
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10/18 c15 OryxGreen
You know, I just have the impression that Harry and Hermione think they are above the law. I know the Ministry is not perfect, but the fact that these two teenagers—just because they're smart and somehow powerful—think that they can be above the law, above the Statute of Secrecy is honestly annoying. I mean, I really liked your premise and I really liked your story, and I'm still curious about it, but you have made them so entitled that sometimes I'm really put off and kind of don't want to read it, whereas before I just couldn't put it down.
You know, I just have the impression that Harry and Hermione think they are above the law. I know the Ministry is not perfect, but the fact that these two teenagers—just because they're smart and somehow powerful—think that they can be above the law, above the Statute of Secrecy is honestly annoying. I mean, I really liked your premise and I really liked your story, and I'm still curious about it, but you have made them so entitled that sometimes I'm really put off and kind of don't want to read it, whereas before I just couldn't put it down.
10/17 c14 OryxGreen
I'm feeling a bit conflicted about some elements in this chapter. First of all, I want to say that I really appreciate your story and the direction it's going. That said, the animal experimentation part was hard for me to accept. While I understand that Harry is doing it for science, it clashes with how I imagine him, even though I know your version of him is different from the canon. I expected Harry to be more comfortable with the idea for scientific purposes, but I was hoping that Hermione wouldn't be as okay with it, or at least wouldn't participate. That was a bit disappointing for me, as it doesn't align with how I envision their core values, even in a different storyline.
I realize that characters can evolve in different ways, but core values are important to me, and when they're crossed, it feels off. Still, I understand it's a different take, and I respect that. I also have mixed feelings about how strong Harry is. I like that he's powerful, but at the same time, that level of strength can make things a bit less exciting because it leaves him with very few challenges. It reminds me of characters like Superman, where their overwhelming strength can make the storylines less engaging since there's no real threat.
Even though I felt a bit uncertain about this chapter, I'm definitely going to keep reading because I enjoy the story and want to see where it goes. While some aspects were a little disappointing, they also piqued my interest in other ways, and I'm curious to see how it unfolds.
I'm feeling a bit conflicted about some elements in this chapter. First of all, I want to say that I really appreciate your story and the direction it's going. That said, the animal experimentation part was hard for me to accept. While I understand that Harry is doing it for science, it clashes with how I imagine him, even though I know your version of him is different from the canon. I expected Harry to be more comfortable with the idea for scientific purposes, but I was hoping that Hermione wouldn't be as okay with it, or at least wouldn't participate. That was a bit disappointing for me, as it doesn't align with how I envision their core values, even in a different storyline.
I realize that characters can evolve in different ways, but core values are important to me, and when they're crossed, it feels off. Still, I understand it's a different take, and I respect that. I also have mixed feelings about how strong Harry is. I like that he's powerful, but at the same time, that level of strength can make things a bit less exciting because it leaves him with very few challenges. It reminds me of characters like Superman, where their overwhelming strength can make the storylines less engaging since there's no real threat.
Even though I felt a bit uncertain about this chapter, I'm definitely going to keep reading because I enjoy the story and want to see where it goes. While some aspects were a little disappointing, they also piqued my interest in other ways, and I'm curious to see how it unfolds.
10/17 c11 OryxGreen
One more thing I would love to point out is that I love how the Ministry is actually competent in your story. In general, I don't see that often in fanfictions. And I really love what you did there. I love that they are able to handle Voldemort's assaults.
One more thing I would love to point out is that I love how the Ministry is actually competent in your story. In general, I don't see that often in fanfictions. And I really love what you did there. I love that they are able to handle Voldemort's assaults.
10/17 c11 OryxGreen
I love how the alteration of canon is presented in your story. I mean, I think it's amazing the way you altered canon and made it into your own story. I'm just so excited. Sometimes when I read fanfics, I anticipate what's going to happen, but this time, the alteration is so different that it's hard to tell what's going to happen exactly or how you're going to go about things. I'm so excited to find out what you're going to do with the story. I'm also happy with the way you developed Harry and Hermione's romance. I mean, it wasn't really developed, was it? You just made them get together after some time without any build-up. But I don't think it was unnatural or unrealistic. I like it quite a bit, and I would love to read more romantic and dramatic moments between them. This story is just great.
I love how the alteration of canon is presented in your story. I mean, I think it's amazing the way you altered canon and made it into your own story. I'm just so excited. Sometimes when I read fanfics, I anticipate what's going to happen, but this time, the alteration is so different that it's hard to tell what's going to happen exactly or how you're going to go about things. I'm so excited to find out what you're going to do with the story. I'm also happy with the way you developed Harry and Hermione's romance. I mean, it wasn't really developed, was it? You just made them get together after some time without any build-up. But I don't think it was unnatural or unrealistic. I like it quite a bit, and I would love to read more romantic and dramatic moments between them. This story is just great.
10/17 c9 OryxGreen
Wow, I cannot believe how good this story is. It is amazing. I'm so excited to continue reading it. Just, it's so full of surprises. I'm just super excited. I have nothing else to say, really. I just wanted to express how amazed and excited I am.
Wow, I cannot believe how good this story is. It is amazing. I'm so excited to continue reading it. Just, it's so full of surprises. I'm just super excited. I have nothing else to say, really. I just wanted to express how amazed and excited I am.
10/16 c4 OryxGreen
Wow, this is brilliant. I have come across this fanfic a few times, but I don't know. I really don't want to start reading this for some odd reason, but I have heard so many great things about it. I decided to give it a go, and I am so impressed. It sounds so good. I can't wait to devour it.
Wow, this is brilliant. I have come across this fanfic a few times, but I don't know. I really don't want to start reading this for some odd reason, but I have heard so many great things about it. I decided to give it a go, and I am so impressed. It sounds so good. I can't wait to devour it.
10/8 c14 
1RightWrong
This is amazing. And scary. And amazing. I’ll confess I stopped reading after the experiments with animals. Not because I was offended with you as an author but because I had difficulty with the subject matter.( It is after all why I abandoned biology and science. The realization of omg what am I going to unleash on the world, and at what moral cost just for my hubris)
In any case, you are an incredible writer with an extraordinary story.
Thanks for writing,
1RightWrongThis is amazing. And scary. And amazing. I’ll confess I stopped reading after the experiments with animals. Not because I was offended with you as an author but because I had difficulty with the subject matter.( It is after all why I abandoned biology and science. The realization of omg what am I going to unleash on the world, and at what moral cost just for my hubris)
In any case, you are an incredible writer with an extraordinary story.
Thanks for writing,