for Brotherhood of an Altered Destiny10/23/2023 c5 Donald Tenney Jr
The first 4 chapters were perfect. This one needs a little editing but the story is good. Over all the start of a great fanfic, I hope you pick this back up!
The first 4 chapters were perfect. This one needs a little editing but the story is good. Over all the start of a great fanfic, I hope you pick this back up!
8/20/2016 c5 Guest
Just started reading this today, ang i'm eagerly awaiting your next update
Just started reading this today, ang i'm eagerly awaiting your next update
7/10/2016 c5 
35Solvdrage
Good to see an update!
The ending is fine. I think a second fight would be an overload for the chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
35SolvdrageGood to see an update!
The ending is fine. I think a second fight would be an overload for the chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter.
10/19/2015 c1 Guest
Please update I whed like to see how this ends
Sinceritly chris
Please update I whed like to see how this ends
Sinceritly chris
6/10/2015 c3 zigmas
They only need Voldemort to complete the Immortal Snake Bastards That FAIL Unit, loool.
They only need Voldemort to complete the Immortal Snake Bastards That FAIL Unit, loool.
6/10/2015 c1 zigmas
How's that an adoption, if you simply copy-pasted the original onto your profile?
Anyways, I was thinking that Goku would "pat-pat" Naruto to see whether he WAS a boy.
And then do the same to NaruKO TOO, loool.
How's that an adoption, if you simply copy-pasted the original onto your profile?
Anyways, I was thinking that Goku would "pat-pat" Naruto to see whether he WAS a boy.
And then do the same to NaruKO TOO, loool.
2/14/2015 c4 CellGamesWinner
Maybe a Naruto/Ranfan pairing
Either way, Update, Update!
Maybe a Naruto/Ranfan pairing
Either way, Update, Update!
2/2/2015 c4 3coronadomontes
maravillosa idea, hacer más grande el número de participantes -wonderful idea, make larger the number of participants
3coronadomontesmaravillosa idea, hacer más grande el número de participantes -wonderful idea, make larger the number of participants