for The Fox's Shadow: Part II1/20 c21 Guest
It has been awhile, what is this “ruse” that Zabuza has going on in regards to Karin? Also, ho does Zabuza NOT SUSPECT that Naruto is an Uzumaki?
It has been awhile, what is this “ruse” that Zabuza has going on in regards to Karin? Also, ho does Zabuza NOT SUSPECT that Naruto is an Uzumaki?
1/20 c21 Guest
Holy Shit, I thought this story was dead! Where have you been for SEVERAL YEARS?
Holy Shit, I thought this story was dead! Where have you been for SEVERAL YEARS?
4/10/2021 c20 Guest
Are you still alive!?
Are you still alive!?
12/30/2020 c8 
2GarfieldJL
Is Kurama channeling his inner HK-47 or something calling everyone meat sacks instead of meat-bags?
2GarfieldJLIs Kurama channeling his inner HK-47 or something calling everyone meat sacks instead of meat-bags?
11/25/2018 c20 Guest
Can you please continue uploading more chapters? The story is great
Can you please continue uploading more chapters? The story is great
9/23/2016 c20 Guest
Uh, Haku seems MUCH MORE Bloodthirsty than canon! I REALLY HOPE that Karin gets to return to Konoha with Naruto! I don't want to see her get killed or forever ALIENATED from her cousin/family!
Uh, Haku seems MUCH MORE Bloodthirsty than canon! I REALLY HOPE that Karin gets to return to Konoha with Naruto! I don't want to see her get killed or forever ALIENATED from her cousin/family!
9/23/2016 c19 6frekat
Welcome back! I hope you enjoyed your adventures in life! Remember to give yourself time if you need it, though. Writing is a hobby and you can't force yourself to write. Look at me, for example. I have a record of never posting new chapters because I never think I'm in the right state of mind.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the good work!
6frekatWelcome back! I hope you enjoyed your adventures in life! Remember to give yourself time if you need it, though. Writing is a hobby and you can't force yourself to write. Look at me, for example. I have a record of never posting new chapters because I never think I'm in the right state of mind.
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter! Keep up the good work!
9/22/2016 c19 Guest
AWE MAN, this DOES NOT bode well!
Still, GLAD to finally see this story update again!
AWE MAN, this DOES NOT bode well!
Still, GLAD to finally see this story update again!
9/17/2016 c18 Thatguy135
Oh God, it's happening, he removed the A.N chapters, I'm so happy I didn't drop this story. It's time, brothers and sisters! The time had come!
Oh God, it's happening, he removed the A.N chapters, I'm so happy I didn't drop this story. It's time, brothers and sisters! The time had come!
9/16/2016 c18 Guest
OK, you got rid of the A.N. Chapter, now what!?
OK, you got rid of the A.N. Chapter, now what!?
7/4/2016 c20 5jackalope33
awww come on! and i was enjoying the first one too! i was on chap 20 when i saw the why omoi cant do weather forecast thing and came over to look for what other stories there were, only to discover there was a sequel that hadn't been updated since january! january! and thats for a AN that claims he is going to continue! come on! don't do this to an interesting story!
ps: glad to see another PJO and naruto fan! they are rare and far in between. even less write decent stories that are original!
5jackalope33awww come on! and i was enjoying the first one too! i was on chap 20 when i saw the why omoi cant do weather forecast thing and came over to look for what other stories there were, only to discover there was a sequel that hadn't been updated since january! january! and thats for a AN that claims he is going to continue! come on! don't do this to an interesting story!
ps: glad to see another PJO and naruto fan! they are rare and far in between. even less write decent stories that are original!
6/13/2016 c20 Guest
It IS NOT NICE to say that you are back and continue to not update! I really hate it when I get my hopes up for nought!
It IS NOT NICE to say that you are back and continue to not update! I really hate it when I get my hopes up for nought!