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11/26/2015 c14 Eunice339
Thank you for your story. Looking forward to the sequel and hope that these two characters will find there way back together in the future.
11/26/2015 c13 Eunice339
Such a sweet ending. Both have grown together and because of each other. Looking forward to the sequel.
11/26/2015 c12 Eunice339
Glad she's standing up for herself.
11/26/2015 c11 Eunice339
It was so sweet for Tobias to throw a surprise party for Tris.
11/26/2015 c10 Eunice339
Glad Tobias and his mom reconciled, but sad that Tori is moving away. Btw, the Disney movies were a cute touch.
11/26/2015 c9 Eunice339
Nice to learn more about Tobias' past.
11/26/2015 c8 Eunice339
Love the plot twist...
11/26/2015 c7 Eunice339
Love how you keep showing the silver lining with everything bad that happens to Tris.
11/26/2015 c6 Eunice339
Our smart Tris picked up on what a bunch of jerks Peter and his friends are. Too bad Tobias didn't warn her bc now she associates them with him.
11/26/2015 c5 Eunice339
Very sweet having them hold hands in the car and share the ear buds. Alison sounds like she's going to be a riot. Peter already seems creepy to me.
11/26/2015 c4 Eunice339
This was adorable - great song choice too.
11/26/2015 c3 Eunice339
Great continuation chapter. Zachary is such a sweetie. Looking forward to learning more about these characters.
11/26/2015 c2 Eunice339
Great idea to include Tobias' POV. When Uriah came up to Tobias and defended Tris, I got a little emotional myself seeing how each of the guys realized they had treated Tris wrongly and then Christina defended her too. Looks like some good came out of the whole situation. I liked that you allowed Tris to forgive Tobias rather than being bitter too. It does illustrate her willingness to see the best in others. Looking forward to the next chapter...
11/26/2015 c1 Eunice339
A solid start. I'm looking forward to reading more. I like that you post your Goal for the story - add me to your follow count :)
11/23/2015 c8 4AllOfTheSeasonsLiveInsideMe
Tobias Eaton on a period. So awesome. Funny, smart, and bloody.
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