for IT STARTED WITH A COLD4/18/2016 c17 Guest
oh my what a twist to this story...
oh my what a twist to this story...
4/18/2016 c15 Guest
Is their a Pinterest from this story? If so I am sure its super...I can imagine Ana singing and playing the piano at the funeral...She sure is mulit talented...great reading story...
Is their a Pinterest from this story? If so I am sure its super...I can imagine Ana singing and playing the piano at the funeral...She sure is mulit talented...great reading story...
4/17/2016 c7 Guest
Love how Ana told off Elena put her in her spot. I am sure Elena is going to big trouble for them. At least Ana is a strong person well brought up from the life stlye she had. Christian is again a changed man thanks to her. great chapter. you know I am enjoying this story too...
Love how Ana told off Elena put her in her spot. I am sure Elena is going to big trouble for them. At least Ana is a strong person well brought up from the life stlye she had. Christian is again a changed man thanks to her. great chapter. you know I am enjoying this story too...
4/16/2016 c2 Guest
oh my... can actually them in her apartment ...great chapter...
oh my... can actually them in her apartment ...great chapter...
4/16/2016 c1 Guest
like it...
like it...
3/13/2016 c10 samy.g
Awesome!
Awesome!
2/26/2016 c31 Shazjackmeg
Off work loaded with the cold! Waiting the next instalment of when the bough breaks and found this story- loved it, so glad u went for the happy ending now where's Mr Grey to make me feel better lol. X
Off work loaded with the cold! Waiting the next instalment of when the bough breaks and found this story- loved it, so glad u went for the happy ending now where's Mr Grey to make me feel better lol. X
2/24/2016 c27 CTHEWOODS
Finally ! Somebody said what I was screaming at all them! Way to go Granny T! Now, let the healing begin!...love your stuff!
Finally ! Somebody said what I was screaming at all them! Way to go Granny T! Now, let the healing begin!...love your stuff!
2/23/2016 c24 CTHEWOODS
Love the imagination you have with your stories...I'm not crazy about the way Grace is being portrayed...plus it makes Ana look more like a bitch...I liked Grace being a little more loose and getting drunk at the beginning, but didn't like Ana treating her confronting her the way she did and blaming her for putting the twins at risk. Maybe if Ana hadn't had clued Carrick and grace in on the threats, then they wouldn't have put the twins at risk. Then blaming it all Christians past for what she was doing hiding the kids like that justified everything was a little weird after her own parents had the kids...? I'd have pissed to if I was Grace...lol...but I love your stories and have read all of them...wish you would do another!
Love the imagination you have with your stories...I'm not crazy about the way Grace is being portrayed...plus it makes Ana look more like a bitch...I liked Grace being a little more loose and getting drunk at the beginning, but didn't like Ana treating her confronting her the way she did and blaming her for putting the twins at risk. Maybe if Ana hadn't had clued Carrick and grace in on the threats, then they wouldn't have put the twins at risk. Then blaming it all Christians past for what she was doing hiding the kids like that justified everything was a little weird after her own parents had the kids...? I'd have pissed to if I was Grace...lol...but I love your stories and have read all of them...wish you would do another!
2/23/2016 c21 CTHEWOODS
I really like the story...was a little bit peeved that Christian was such a wuss until the shower scene upon her return...that was little redemption on his part for making him more manly...especially with his trust issues...I still don't know if I could have forgave that quickly on denying me my children! The only hole I see in the story is with all of Ana's high up security and Christian's as well, would either ever think that they couldn't be protected or gone into hiding while taking out the trash, 'the ghost'. But it has kept my attention and I do know it's fiction...lol! Keep up the great work!
I really like the story...was a little bit peeved that Christian was such a wuss until the shower scene upon her return...that was little redemption on his part for making him more manly...especially with his trust issues...I still don't know if I could have forgave that quickly on denying me my children! The only hole I see in the story is with all of Ana's high up security and Christian's as well, would either ever think that they couldn't be protected or gone into hiding while taking out the trash, 'the ghost'. But it has kept my attention and I do know it's fiction...lol! Keep up the great work!
2/10/2016 c11 kim4trisntobias4ever
Just found this gem! Love this so much! Hilarious and crazy and loving all in one!
Just found this gem! Love this so much! Hilarious and crazy and loving all in one!
2/3/2016 c31 kushka
An absolute pleasure to read
An absolute pleasure to read
1/10/2016 c31 GUEST
JUST READ YOUR STORY AND LOVED IT. THANK YOU
JUST READ YOUR STORY AND LOVED IT. THANK YOU