for IT STARTED WITH A COLD
11/4/2015 c1 Guest
I think one chapter was more than enough. Only how bad it is witten is topping the awful plot and the characters who seem to be idiots. You did horrible things to that language, from start to finish full of mistakes.
I think one chapter was more than enough. Only how bad it is witten is topping the awful plot and the characters who seem to be idiots. You did horrible things to that language, from start to finish full of mistakes.
1/4/2015 c1 jotyler39
Oh yes! I'd love to read more of this, I always reading a caring CG, & Ana is funny whilst sick. Plz update this soon..
Oh yes! I'd love to read more of this, I always reading a caring CG, & Ana is funny whilst sick. Plz update this soon..
1/4/2015 c1 KJ Bell
More please I like druggy and high as a kite Ana so cute how christian is caring for her.
More please I like druggy and high as a kite Ana so cute how christian is caring for her.
1/4/2015 c1 Guest
Love rambling Ana !
Love rambling Ana !
1/4/2015 c1 posses45
This is the best, you bet I want more. Christian is the man, Ana is so funny and sweet, so much can happen and you do know how to spin a perfect fifty shades fan fiction.
This is the best, you bet I want more. Christian is the man, Ana is so funny and sweet, so much can happen and you do know how to spin a perfect fifty shades fan fiction.
1/4/2015 c1 Guest
No.
No.
1/4/2015 c1 Lilygreen
Loved it! Very different. Can't wait for the second chapter.
Loved it! Very different. Can't wait for the second chapter.
1/4/2015 c1 Guest
More!
More!
1/4/2015 c1 myaozm
Not bad..quite an interesting read :)..can't wait what's in store next but hope they won't fall in love too fast
Not bad..quite an interesting read :)..can't wait what's in store next but hope they won't fall in love too fast