
8/15/2016 c13 Guest
Well done for finishing the story. I look forward to reading the sequel and hope it will be as good as this was.
Well done for finishing the story. I look forward to reading the sequel and hope it will be as good as this was.
8/15/2016 c13
4Abitat Eco
(Snifflesinto a tissue) L-Lovely work, so sad...so very very sad :( But the sequel is here yaaay XD Brilliant work as always I will go read the sequel now XD xxx

(Snifflesinto a tissue) L-Lovely work, so sad...so very very sad :( But the sequel is here yaaay XD Brilliant work as always I will go read the sequel now XD xxx
8/14/2016 c13 Saoirse in the Queen's English
*wipes tears* This was so emotional! Agh, I want to go straight into Spirits but I need to review. I love that Flora's dying words were to help Luke, since I somewhat ship the two, sorry. XD Anyways, great writing, and now on to Spirits. Lukebetternotdie.
*wipes tears* This was so emotional! Agh, I want to go straight into Spirits but I need to review. I love that Flora's dying words were to help Luke, since I somewhat ship the two, sorry. XD Anyways, great writing, and now on to Spirits. Lukebetternotdie.
8/11/2016 c12 Guest
Its really sad but good that Luke could say goodbye but I wonder what will happen next. Will you really let Flora die?
Its really sad but good that Luke could say goodbye but I wonder what will happen next. Will you really let Flora die?
8/7/2016 c12 Guest
Oh my gosh :,C
Good chapter!
Oh my gosh :,C
Good chapter!
8/6/2016 c12 Guest
This is so sad poor luke :(
This is so sad poor luke :(
8/5/2016 c12 Abitat Eco
Ooooh yeeeeah this story is back in action! :D Aww I did feel sad reading it, all the emotions in the farewells...so wait is Dimitri Luke's captor then? In the sequel I imagine Flora's spirit will be there trying to calm or rescue Luke :,( Im sorry to hear you weren't very well but at least you're better now :) Take care of yourself girl and see you soon :) xxxx
Ooooh yeeeeah this story is back in action! :D Aww I did feel sad reading it, all the emotions in the farewells...so wait is Dimitri Luke's captor then? In the sequel I imagine Flora's spirit will be there trying to calm or rescue Luke :,( Im sorry to hear you weren't very well but at least you're better now :) Take care of yourself girl and see you soon :) xxxx
8/5/2016 c12
36EmeraldWings1992
D'aw! Luke! Poor boy. Poor Luke! And Flora! GAH!
And the start of that last vision gave me chills! I wonder what Dimitir Allan wants with Luke!?

D'aw! Luke! Poor boy. Poor Luke! And Flora! GAH!
And the start of that last vision gave me chills! I wonder what Dimitir Allan wants with Luke!?
7/22/2016 c11
4Abitat Eco
Short but a sweet update :D great work, I can't wait for the sequel and the next chapters, Flora is certainly being brave and the description Is lovely, as Luke still believes she will make it :( Have a lovely holiday and good luck with the next chapter :D xxx

Short but a sweet update :D great work, I can't wait for the sequel and the next chapters, Flora is certainly being brave and the description Is lovely, as Luke still believes she will make it :( Have a lovely holiday and good luck with the next chapter :D xxx
7/22/2016 c11
36EmeraldWings1992
Poor Flora. I feel so bad for her! I really hope she doesn't die, but that seems to be the direction this story is taking... *sigh*
I can't wait to see what happens next!

Poor Flora. I feel so bad for her! I really hope she doesn't die, but that seems to be the direction this story is taking... *sigh*
I can't wait to see what happens next!
6/30/2016 c10 Guest
I'm so glad to see this again! It's very well written, and I'm excited to find out what will happen. Thank you for the update!
I'm so glad to see this again! It's very well written, and I'm excited to find out what will happen. Thank you for the update!
6/7/2016 c10
4Abitat Eco
(Sniffles into tissues) It was so lovely to see an update so soon Im really looking forward to finding out what happens :D Oh, is there going to be a sequel I have to ask? XD Flora is so brave and the professor so kind Im so glad you updated this soon, well done! Im hooked, Pleeease don't leave us hanging in suspense XD xxx

(Sniffles into tissues) It was so lovely to see an update so soon Im really looking forward to finding out what happens :D Oh, is there going to be a sequel I have to ask? XD Flora is so brave and the professor so kind Im so glad you updated this soon, well done! Im hooked, Pleeease don't leave us hanging in suspense XD xxx
6/7/2016 c10 ElJadius
I missed this story so much! Thank you for returning with an amazing chapter! 3
I love how Flora remains so peaceful on the verge of death. It proves what a strong character she is. If it were me, I'd probably be crying every five minutes and begging my family for Pokemon toys.
I can't wait for the next chapter! *fingers crossed for the kidnapper to be Clive*
As you can see, I love him.
I missed this story so much! Thank you for returning with an amazing chapter! 3
I love how Flora remains so peaceful on the verge of death. It proves what a strong character she is. If it were me, I'd probably be crying every five minutes and begging my family for Pokemon toys.
I can't wait for the next chapter! *fingers crossed for the kidnapper to be Clive*
As you can see, I love him.
6/7/2016 c10 HAPPY
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING I'VE BEEN EAGERLY AWAITING THE RETURN OF THIS BOOK AND IT MADE MY WEEK
IT'S HONESTLY ONE OF THE BEST LAYTON FANFICTIONS I'VE EVER READ
THANK YOU 3333
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING I'VE BEEN EAGERLY AWAITING THE RETURN OF THIS BOOK AND IT MADE MY WEEK
IT'S HONESTLY ONE OF THE BEST LAYTON FANFICTIONS I'VE EVER READ
THANK YOU 3333