for Visions6/6/2016 c10 girlycathy
AHHHH SOO GOOD I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
FLORA PLEASE TELL HIM PROFESSOR YOU HAVE TO LISTEN PLS PLS FOR LUKES SAKE AND FLORAS SAKE PLEASE
AHHHH SOO GOOD I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART
FLORA PLEASE TELL HIM PROFESSOR YOU HAVE TO LISTEN PLS PLS FOR LUKES SAKE AND FLORAS SAKE PLEASE
6/6/2016 c10 
36EmeraldWings1992
Of course the logical professor wouldn't believe something like visions. Poor Flora.
Hopefully, the professor won't feel too bad when Luke gets kidnapped...
This was a good chapter! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!
36EmeraldWings1992Of course the logical professor wouldn't believe something like visions. Poor Flora.
Hopefully, the professor won't feel too bad when Luke gets kidnapped...
This was a good chapter! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!
6/5/2016 c9 EmeraldWings1992
This story is very captivating! I'm really curious as to what will happen with Luke, Dimitri's stake in all of this, and what's going to happen! I can't wait to read more!
This story is very captivating! I'm really curious as to what will happen with Luke, Dimitri's stake in all of this, and what's going to happen! I can't wait to read more!
6/5/2016 c9 4Abitat Eco
Ahhh Nicki! It's great to hear from you! I've missed you and Im so glad you're continuing your stories :D Pff believe me Im inundated with college work and A levels that I haven't even thought about my fics lol XD This was such a touching chapter, I love how Flora is trying to be hopeful and the emotions of all the characters are perfect. I can't wait to read more! Take care and enjoy your summer! :) xxx
4Abitat EcoAhhh Nicki! It's great to hear from you! I've missed you and Im so glad you're continuing your stories :D Pff believe me Im inundated with college work and A levels that I haven't even thought about my fics lol XD This was such a touching chapter, I love how Flora is trying to be hopeful and the emotions of all the characters are perfect. I can't wait to read more! Take care and enjoy your summer! :) xxx
6/4/2016 c9 girlycathy
Ahhhh this is amazing! I'd forgotten about this story hahahaha but now that it's more or less back it's even better! No worries about the lengthy gaps between updates, it's totally fine!
~girlycathy~
Ahhhh this is amazing! I'd forgotten about this story hahahaha but now that it's more or less back it's even better! No worries about the lengthy gaps between updates, it's totally fine!
~girlycathy~
10/30/2015 c8 ElJadius
I started reading this today, and I ended up reading the whole thing! It's totally awesome! I really wasn't expecting Dimitri to be the 'bad guy', but then, when I read it, it really made sense xD
I feel so sorry for Flora! I love how you portray her character, especially as she doesn't get much attention in the Professor Layton games. Please update this story! You're an awesome writer, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
~El
I started reading this today, and I ended up reading the whole thing! It's totally awesome! I really wasn't expecting Dimitri to be the 'bad guy', but then, when I read it, it really made sense xD
I feel so sorry for Flora! I love how you portray her character, especially as she doesn't get much attention in the Professor Layton games. Please update this story! You're an awesome writer, and I cannot wait for the next chapter! :D
~El
8/24/2015 c8 CrimsonTulip
But...but...DIMITRI HOW COULD YOU?! :( Flora certainly did a good job standing up to meanie Dimiri through, haha.
Something sinister is going on here...and Flora is now Dr. Who. xD (Haven't actually watched it though :/ ) (And Xenoblade Chronicles is a giant JRPG made for Wii a few years ago and just got a re-release for the New Nintendo 3DS this year, the protagonist Shulk [who also has visons] is infamous for saying the "I'm Really Feeling It!" line in Super Smash Brothers 4. Just thought I'd drop that load of info in case you didn't understand the joke, otherwise, you can ignore it :) )
The suspense! I hope the Professor makes an appearance soon!
But...but...DIMITRI HOW COULD YOU?! :( Flora certainly did a good job standing up to meanie Dimiri through, haha.
Something sinister is going on here...and Flora is now Dr. Who. xD (Haven't actually watched it though :/ ) (And Xenoblade Chronicles is a giant JRPG made for Wii a few years ago and just got a re-release for the New Nintendo 3DS this year, the protagonist Shulk [who also has visons] is infamous for saying the "I'm Really Feeling It!" line in Super Smash Brothers 4. Just thought I'd drop that load of info in case you didn't understand the joke, otherwise, you can ignore it :) )
The suspense! I hope the Professor makes an appearance soon!
8/23/2015 c8 Abitat Eco
WOW! Oh my goodness Dimitri you sound like a heartless git in this thst you don't CARE Flora us dying! But the explanation is very, very detailed, believable and it makes perfect sense to the reader. I do wonder what effect he had I tended the serum to actually have...but the fourth vision I fear will come soon :( and then Ill probably be crying all over again. Super description, Im loving this story so much! Keep up the brilliant work, Nikki, take care and see you around soon, good luck with the next chapter! Xxxx
WOW! Oh my goodness Dimitri you sound like a heartless git in this thst you don't CARE Flora us dying! But the explanation is very, very detailed, believable and it makes perfect sense to the reader. I do wonder what effect he had I tended the serum to actually have...but the fourth vision I fear will come soon :( and then Ill probably be crying all over again. Super description, Im loving this story so much! Keep up the brilliant work, Nikki, take care and see you around soon, good luck with the next chapter! Xxxx
8/22/2015 c8 4girlycathy
Such suspense!
I can't wait for the next chapter, this is so good!
~girlycathy~
4girlycathySuch suspense!
I can't wait for the next chapter, this is so good!
~girlycathy~
8/9/2015 c7 4Abitat Eco
Nooo Flora DX Oooh is the kidnapper someone we know or will we find out soon? I can't wait to see Luke's reaction to Flora's illness I ship Fluke so much :D Your writing is improving definitely my friend! Keep up the brilliant work Nikki, I feel so sorry for Layton :( Take care and I hope to see an update soon soon soooon! :D xxxx
4Abitat EcoNooo Flora DX Oooh is the kidnapper someone we know or will we find out soon? I can't wait to see Luke's reaction to Flora's illness I ship Fluke so much :D Your writing is improving definitely my friend! Keep up the brilliant work Nikki, I feel so sorry for Layton :( Take care and I hope to see an update soon soon soooon! :D xxxx
8/9/2015 c7 CrimsonRibbon
oh...
Oh.
OHHHHH.
That tie-in at the end got me so pumped! You were right, I was definitely excited for this chapter! :D But uh-oh, Flora saw that Luke's in trouble...
Guess you can say that Flora was...REALLY FEELING IT *shameless Xenoblade references*
oh...
Oh.
OHHHHH.
That tie-in at the end got me so pumped! You were right, I was definitely excited for this chapter! :D But uh-oh, Flora saw that Luke's in trouble...
Guess you can say that Flora was...REALLY FEELING IT *shameless Xenoblade references*
8/8/2015 c7 Guest
WHAAAA! This is getting so good! Darn it, now you've got ME excited for the next chapter, too!
WHAAAA! This is getting so good! Darn it, now you've got ME excited for the next chapter, too!
8/8/2015 c7 6Descole'sApprentice
This chapter... I have the feels now :( I can't wait for Luke to come though. Things are getting more interesting every chapter!
6Descole'sApprenticeThis chapter... I have the feels now :( I can't wait for Luke to come though. Things are getting more interesting every chapter!
8/3/2015 c6 CrimsonRose
Hey, this kind of writing is right up my alley! This might sound a bit morbid to you but I enjoy reflections on death and I think you did a good job shedding some light on her reactions to the letter and even to her actual father (which, again, I haven't thought of because of how dull she is in-game). Short chapter, but that means something good is next, right? :D
Hey, this kind of writing is right up my alley! This might sound a bit morbid to you but I enjoy reflections on death and I think you did a good job shedding some light on her reactions to the letter and even to her actual father (which, again, I haven't thought of because of how dull she is in-game). Short chapter, but that means something good is next, right? :D