for Visions7/31/2015 c6 
4Abitat Eco
Aww poor Flora :( She's brave deep down, I love how people try to portray her personality more clearly in stories like this because I agree with the other comments on how she is portrayed :D Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to the response from said letter :D xxxx
4Abitat EcoAww poor Flora :( She's brave deep down, I love how people try to portray her personality more clearly in stories like this because I agree with the other comments on how she is portrayed :D Keep up the great work and I'm looking forward to the response from said letter :D xxxx
7/30/2015 c6 Guest
Brilliant! You've got quite a way with words. I'd like to see more of this soon!
Brilliant! You've got quite a way with words. I'd like to see more of this soon!
7/23/2015 c5 1pretentiouslisp
I have literally just sat down and read every single chapter and now I don't want to stop. Can't wait for the next one!x
1pretentiouslispI have literally just sat down and read every single chapter and now I don't want to stop. Can't wait for the next one!x
7/20/2015 c5 CrimsonLobster
Whoa, I've been avoiding this for a while because I reaaally think Flora is boring from Curious Village on but when you flesh out Layton's relationship to her and acting as a father, then it gets interesting. It was a risk worth taking, and I look forward to every update :) Have a happy holiday!
Whoa, I've been avoiding this for a while because I reaaally think Flora is boring from Curious Village on but when you flesh out Layton's relationship to her and acting as a father, then it gets interesting. It was a risk worth taking, and I look forward to every update :) Have a happy holiday!
7/20/2015 c5 4Abitat Eco
Oh nooooo! The experiment part is new...I love that idea :D But poor Flora and I pactong climax cliffhanger...aw I'll miss this story for a few days but I hope you have a great and well deserved holiday my friend! Take care and best of luck for the next chapter! Xxxxx :D
4Abitat EcoOh nooooo! The experiment part is new...I love that idea :D But poor Flora and I pactong climax cliffhanger...aw I'll miss this story for a few days but I hope you have a great and well deserved holiday my friend! Take care and best of luck for the next chapter! Xxxxx :D
7/20/2015 c5 6Descole'sApprentice
Your stories are so amazing! Flora isn't really one of my favorite characters, but this story is just... Wow. :)
6Descole'sApprenticeYour stories are so amazing! Flora isn't really one of my favorite characters, but this story is just... Wow. :)
7/19/2015 c4 Guest
Oh gosh... Everything! IT'S SO GOOD! I really, really like the way you've written this, and I want to see where you'll take it.
Oh gosh... Everything! IT'S SO GOOD! I really, really like the way you've written this, and I want to see where you'll take it.
7/19/2015 c4 4Abitat Eco
Oooh! The revelation of her visions beginssss! :D It's a nice idea Luke moved to France and a great update, I love how quickly you write them, I wish mine were as quick ️Haha :D Can't wait for the next one! Good luck and take care for now my friend! Xxx :D
4Abitat EcoOooh! The revelation of her visions beginssss! :D It's a nice idea Luke moved to France and a great update, I love how quickly you write them, I wish mine were as quick ️Haha :D Can't wait for the next one! Good luck and take care for now my friend! Xxx :D
7/19/2015 c3 Abitat Eco
Yaaay! You're back! This is a brilliant rewrite so far, much more descriptive. Poor Flora you can really imagine how she's feeling :( And I think Flora deserves more love and you really portray her well :D Keep up the brilliant work Nixi! I'm looking forward to more of this! Xxx :D
Yaaay! You're back! This is a brilliant rewrite so far, much more descriptive. Poor Flora you can really imagine how she's feeling :( And I think Flora deserves more love and you really portray her well :D Keep up the brilliant work Nixi! I'm looking forward to more of this! Xxx :D
7/17/2015 c3 jess
I love your stories!
This is really good too!
I love your stories!
This is really good too!
7/14/2015 c2 165chloemcg
Hmmm, this is a very genuinely interesting read. If you do this right, then you can actually make Flora so much more interesting then she is in the games. A story where Flora is appreciated...never has that been accomplished, I think you can make this totally cool!
And a one-shot story for Claire and Layton, how about where the professor takes Claire out and the two share a romantic dance where Hershel softly sings a romantic song?
It's just a suggestion and you don't have to do it, but I wish you luck on more stories just the same.
165chloemcgHmmm, this is a very genuinely interesting read. If you do this right, then you can actually make Flora so much more interesting then she is in the games. A story where Flora is appreciated...never has that been accomplished, I think you can make this totally cool!
And a one-shot story for Claire and Layton, how about where the professor takes Claire out and the two share a romantic dance where Hershel softly sings a romantic song?
It's just a suggestion and you don't have to do it, but I wish you luck on more stories just the same.