
4/10 c56 raynaninja
I really like this story! Please update again soon! You are a very good writer, and it would be sad if this story were to remain unfinished. Hope you continue writing this!
I really like this story! Please update again soon! You are a very good writer, and it would be sad if this story were to remain unfinished. Hope you continue writing this!
3/30 c56 battery91pct
Haha, is Harry trying to propose the idea of adopting himself only after making sure he won't be an economic burden?
Haha, is Harry trying to propose the idea of adopting himself only after making sure he won't be an economic burden?
3/27 c56
3NimonaRules
I love this story! It has to be one of the best Harry/Severus family fics that I've ever read. A little suggestion, using phrases like "the boy" or "the blonde" make a story feel more choppy and kind of makes it harder to read. Using names and pronouns might feel repetitive, but I think it makes the story flow more smoothly. Anyways, your writing has made me cry so many times and I can't wait to see the next chapter, I hope you're able to write it soon! Happy reading!

I love this story! It has to be one of the best Harry/Severus family fics that I've ever read. A little suggestion, using phrases like "the boy" or "the blonde" make a story feel more choppy and kind of makes it harder to read. Using names and pronouns might feel repetitive, but I think it makes the story flow more smoothly. Anyways, your writing has made me cry so many times and I can't wait to see the next chapter, I hope you're able to write it soon! Happy reading!
3/2 c56 Caro
Thank you for sharing with us this extremely lovely fic. I hope you find the time and motivation to continue this soon. (.../before/ a hurricane comes up to speed things on, say. XP )
Thank you for sharing with us this extremely lovely fic. I hope you find the time and motivation to continue this soon. (.../before/ a hurricane comes up to speed things on, say. XP )
3/2 c49 Caro
That last sentence was really wonderfully chosen! VERY nice. :)
That last sentence was really wonderfully chosen! VERY nice. :)
3/2 c40 Caro
It's great how you have McGonagall handle Snape.
It's great how you have McGonagall handle Snape.
3/1 c28 Caro
Ohmigosh! Your scene of the last potions class - it was brilliant! I was laughing like anything XD ;,D
Ohmigosh! Your scene of the last potions class - it was brilliant! I was laughing like anything XD ;,D
2/5 c1 zaniarein247
I recently had the pleasure of reading your story,A Thousand Words
and I was truly impressed by the storytelling, character depth, and vibrant visuals. It’s clear a lot of passion went into creating it.
As a digital artist with 4 years of experience in comic book art, I specialize in transforming traditional stories into high-quality digital masterpieces. From optimizing each panel for web publishing to creating digital prints or interactive formats, I ensure your original vision shines through in every detail.
If you're interested in bringing your story into the digital realm, let’s collaborate! I work on a commission basis, so we can tailor the project to your needs.
Looking forward to connecting! You can reach me on Discord: alimaggoon
I recently had the pleasure of reading your story,A Thousand Words
and I was truly impressed by the storytelling, character depth, and vibrant visuals. It’s clear a lot of passion went into creating it.
As a digital artist with 4 years of experience in comic book art, I specialize in transforming traditional stories into high-quality digital masterpieces. From optimizing each panel for web publishing to creating digital prints or interactive formats, I ensure your original vision shines through in every detail.
If you're interested in bringing your story into the digital realm, let’s collaborate! I work on a commission basis, so we can tailor the project to your needs.
Looking forward to connecting! You can reach me on Discord: alimaggoon
1/29 c56 Violet Temperance
Im wicked invested in this story! Will harry ever tell Snape about the journal? Will it fall into someone else's hands who had it before like in the books or Will it be something different? I hope you come back to it, if not, it's been a great read!
Im wicked invested in this story! Will harry ever tell Snape about the journal? Will it fall into someone else's hands who had it before like in the books or Will it be something different? I hope you come back to it, if not, it's been a great read!
1/10 c56
11Regalswiftie
I absolutely LOVE this story! I read it all in one sitting! I’ve been reading a lot of Severus adopting/mentoring Harry fics lately, but this is by far my favorite! Thank you for writingI hope you’ll update soon!

I absolutely LOVE this story! I read it all in one sitting! I’ve been reading a lot of Severus adopting/mentoring Harry fics lately, but this is by far my favorite! Thank you for writingI hope you’ll update soon!
11/21/2024 c56 Glensby
Well, I powered through all 56 chapters so fast and it was well worth it. As others have doubtlessly pointed out, this story has been a treat to read. As someone who writes myself, I knew there was something good coming when I noted how excellently you put the plot points together to stage the driving conflict as well as Snape and Harry’s relationship. Additionally, watching them develop together has been an absolute treat-not only is it true to the characters from the original story, but it feels like a natural progression of their dynamic. I absolutely adore this and my only sadness is that there isn’t more. If you ever decide to pick this up again, you will definitely have an eager reader in me. You have a real skill in balancing plot, story, and description. Regardless if you do or don’t continue (though I hope you might consider lol), thank you for sharing and have a fantastic day! :)
Well, I powered through all 56 chapters so fast and it was well worth it. As others have doubtlessly pointed out, this story has been a treat to read. As someone who writes myself, I knew there was something good coming when I noted how excellently you put the plot points together to stage the driving conflict as well as Snape and Harry’s relationship. Additionally, watching them develop together has been an absolute treat-not only is it true to the characters from the original story, but it feels like a natural progression of their dynamic. I absolutely adore this and my only sadness is that there isn’t more. If you ever decide to pick this up again, you will definitely have an eager reader in me. You have a real skill in balancing plot, story, and description. Regardless if you do or don’t continue (though I hope you might consider lol), thank you for sharing and have a fantastic day! :)
11/5/2024 c56 Claire
I there! I just wanted to let you know how much I truly enjoy your story so far! I've binge read until here, and I know that life can be very hectic at times. I do hope you continue this story until it is finished, it has me absolutely hooked!
I there! I just wanted to let you know how much I truly enjoy your story so far! I've binge read until here, and I know that life can be very hectic at times. I do hope you continue this story until it is finished, it has me absolutely hooked!