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8/11/2015 c22 Guest
This is really good. I like the pacing and the fact that snape is still like his character in the books but still sympathetic :)
8/4/2015 c22 Invisible Light
Hi there!

First off, I wish you the best of luck with law school! I know it'll keep you busy, but I hope you can sneak in a chapter or two while studying. ;)

Second, this is a great chapter! I love it! Is Harry ever going to write that perfect essay, I wonder? And I bet Snape is going to be the first to hear about "The Voice in the Wall". That's my guess, anyway. I can't wait to find out. :-)

Thanks for another awesome chapter! I hope to see another one soon!
8/4/2015 c22 103Above the Winter Moonlight
Very very good chapter and I liked Harry's reaction to the voice and how it affected his attempts to improve on his essay. Looking forward to the next chapter. Update soon.
8/4/2015 c22 4Imagination94
I'm loving this story. Well Done! Hope to see more soon :)
8/4/2015 c22 11Genuka
Oh dear, well at least two of his teachers have noticed that something is wrong.
8/4/2015 c22 Guest
Great chapter! You write Lockhart very well. Looking forward to the next chapter whenever it may be.
8/4/2015 c22 6Black Night15
LOL! I could totally see that scene with Snape and Lockhart actually happening in canon. :-D

My sister did law school, so I understand how hectic it can be. As for myself, there was a time when I was updating once a week, until I got my part-time job. Now I'm lucky if I can manage a few sentences!

For the record, I've read many Snape/Harry mentor fics, and a lot of them were good. But so far, yours is the best one I've come across. :-)

Best wishes in law school!
8/4/2015 c22 16WRose
Hope he hears the voice NOW before Snape
8/4/2015 c22 16BlueWater5
Good luck at Law School! Please don't abandon the story ...
8/4/2015 c22 xxxLeanniexxx
Damnit Severus and Minerva !

Are ye blind ?

Now Severus you were a spy for crying out loud!

I just want to give Harry a hug!

Update soon and best of luck with law school
8/4/2015 c22 2Amarenima Redwood
Brilliant! Good luck at Law School!
8/3/2015 c21 2Perry
Love it! I can't wait for more. You're interactions between Snape and Harry are great!
7/29/2015 c21 3MillieJane9000
I am absolutely loving this story! Your pacing is wonderful - any changes in Harry and Snape's relationship would have to be gradual, and you do that very well. And you capture all of the characters very nicely. I can't wait to see where you go with this story!
7/29/2015 c21 Guest
Great job! This story is so well-written and I have enjoyed it a lot. I can't wait to see what happens next. I think your characters are well developed and I can't help but feel for all that Harry goes through. You have done a great job keeping it suspenseful and a little angsty as well as emotional. You truly portray Harry, Ron and Hermione's friendship well and Lockhart is spot on. He's just as annoying as ever.
Also, I love your Snape character. He is strict and can be a little nasty but that's him. I love that he is little by little showing concern and care for Harry. It's just a matter of getting under his shell. I am so glad that this is a gradual process and not not if those he turns nice over night (or a matter of minutes) type of stories.
Minerva does seem a little bit more caring than in canon so I am also curious as to where that leads.
A couple well meaning suggestions/ideas: they need to ward the school at Christmas so students need to be sent home. They send Harry on the train as well not knowing that he can't return to his family. Harry isleft at the station not knowing what to do and is found by Snape, or stays at the station overnight before discovered or tries to steal some food or something like that.
A little angsty situation at Snape's as Harry stays there not really knowing how to act in someone else's house (manners, will he get fed, punishment/dicipline,what's normal etc.)
Thanks for an awesome story and I'm excited for the next chapter.
7/26/2015 c21 Guest
Lovely story
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