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for During an act, I won't respond again!

12/14/2016 c1 5MWEH
I love how the age could go up with just a look xD
And Ren didn't hear her, did he? Too bad *sigh*
6/27/2016 c1 26Fi Suki Saki
#sobbing

I want to see this as canon! D'x

The intimate sexy almost erotic scene was just too Intense!

Makes me shuddered with temptation to see it for real!
6/3/2016 c1 7LovelyVentures
Cute. So cute. I know this is wine shot but i feel that it could easily have more if u wanted.
3/27/2016 c1 auairie
Hahahaha... i love the part
"Tsuruga-san, yes, the commercial requires you to show your charms but.. the look you gave Kyoko-chan while you touched her cheek was.. a little bit too intense. This commercial is rated 13 yet it might move to 18 if you continued looking at her like that"

I cant imagine how hard ren to control him self... lol
Btw love ur work anyway... i hope there is more ;)
2/13/2016 c1 9AJohnlockAddict
Did you ever write a follow up chapter? I'm asking simply so I can be all happy and aflutter! Because this was C-U-T-E, cute!
1/21/2016 c1 47marauderluverz
Good job! A very intense and kinda funny oneshot.
1/1/2016 c1 madamkyochan
iT'S so cute :) kawaaiii! ~
1/1/2016 c1 A Musing Brunette
Woot, woot!
First off, I don't know why, but I just love Director Kurosaki. I've liked his character in the manga since they first introduced him, so seeing him in this one-shot- awesome sauce. lol

Second, that warning over it being a commercial with a 13 rating had me cracking up.

Good job on your first one-shot.
12/31/2015 c1 Guest
Wow. what a cute one-shot. :D
12/31/2015 c1 Guest
GAHHHH I LOVED THIS, THERE ISN'T NEAR ENOUGH REN AND KYOKO TIME IN THE MANGA. THANK YOU FOR THE ONE SHOT IT WAS AMAZING
12/30/2015 c1 isakapa
continue it!
12/30/2015 c1 mynameisprincisusu
Love it!
12/30/2015 c1 Marenza412
Please continue. This was adorable. I would love to see how Ren took that line and Kyoko is going to try and remain just an innocent kohi.
12/29/2015 c1 Guest
Love it that was great love more from you whish you'd continue this one at least with ren going in to her dressing room to address her response to his line
12/29/2015 c1 Guest
Noooo!
Where is the second chapter? It's gone before I could read it :(((((
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