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3/19/2017 c19 Guest
MORE! MORE! MORE! please... it's too good for you to stop.
3/5/2017 c19 9Final Pharaoh
this just gets more and more interesting. i can't wait to read more
3/5/2017 c12 Final Pharaoh
i really like this story, it's the only good Jabberwocky story i've so far. i've always felt sympathetic to old Wocky and always wondered what would've happen if another human fell to underland and befriended it before its big fight with Alice.

oops, did i ramble? terribly sorry. anyway, love the story! :D
2/4/2017 c19 Guest
do not stop
7/23/2016 c19 Guest
Oh, Come On! I want to read more!
This is a great chapter!
7/16/2016 c19 lostlittlegrrl
Fantastic! Please continue!
4/21/2016 c18 Guest
pleases continue! I love it!
10/6/2015 c18 9LadyGranuaille
Excellent work. What you've done here is really special, you've expanded on the original -verse without altering the Tim Burton-ness or Lewis Carrol's fancy of Underland. I think it would be nice to check in with with 'hunams' that are seeking to rescue Alice more often, particularly the White Queen-you've written her quite well, although I'd love to see more! I especially like all the talk about paradoxes, I think Carrol would be proud. How you've built the Jabberwocky history is very reminiscent (at least to me) of Ursula Le Guin's dragons in the Earthsea series. For books that might help prompt the story writing (not that I have an ulterior motive...), I'd recommend Madeline L'Engle's Wrinkle in Time series, and Duane's So You Want to Be a Wizard. These books play nicely with concepts of time, space, and paradoxes, which are intriguing and well-utilized features of your story so far. Keep up the good work! I know its hard to find time to update chapters, my history is pretty embarrassing there...But you should be very proud of what you've done here.
10/2/2015 c18 27Shadow'sDelight
XD

Awesome! XD
10/1/2015 c18 4CrazynSane
NOT A PROBLEM...FOR AN AIW FANFIC, THIS IS PRETTY FREAKING SWEET...IN FACT, THIS IS KINDA OUT OF THE NORMAL STORY GENRE I READ...
HEY, NEVER CLAIMED TO BE NORMAL IN THE SLIGHTEST...
NICE BATHROOM TOUCH...WOULDA BEEN WAY TOO AWKWARD TO EXPLAIN THE 'MONTHLY CYCLE'...mwahaha
my support for awesome stories remains intact, even if my creativity towards my own stories were to perish...which, since l'm stuck with writers block, what better way to get the creativity flowing than to drink from the endless streams of stories that provide inspiration from the fountains of other imaginations?
Yeah, pretty cheesy way of putting it, but what can l say? l'm tired, but l can't sleep, and crazy on the edge of insanity...l so have to turn that into a song...
feel free to shut me up whenever- OWW
Me- Mikey! What are you doing here? You're supposed to be with the others?
Mikey- Checking to see you luggage packing skills...apparently, you forgot your extra large, butt-kicking, handsome ninja turtle, but l think l fixed that by repacking your bag right before we left the other website...
Me- What are you- MIIIIKKKEEEYYYYYY! YOU TOOK OUT ALL MY SPARE CLOTHES, AND REPLACED THEM WITH PIZZA?!
Mikey- Of course not...only the big stuff...but l didn't know why these little fancy hats were here, since l never see you wear them, so l figured l'd leave them and ask about them...
Me- What're you...*instant realization, facepalms* OMG...Mikey...those...aren't...hats...
;D
hope u understood this...my brain is well-fried, and slightly delusional at the moment, but l appreciate the support acknowledgement...sometimes we authors forget to show appreciation, and l am happy to see how you take the time to acknowledge and thank your reviewers and supporters...bet the red queen doesn't
8/5/2015 c17 CrazynSane
although l may be a bit underknowledged about Jabberwockies, l definitely know a good writer when l see their stories...and this is a great story...a production that shines light on the creators themselves...great job! :D
5/29/2015 c16 27Shadow'sDelight
Wow, it's so great that you updated another chapter of this story again! I've been thoroughly enjoying reading it. You do a wonderful job explaining the scenes, the conversation and everything else!

Wonderful job!

I hope that you have a great and blessed day.
3/3/2015 c15 Shadow'sDelight
Amazing! I love it!
3/1/2015 c14 Shadow'sDelight
Beautiful!
2/28/2015 c8 Shadow'sDelight
This story is really exciting to read and I can't wait until the next chapter is updated!

Please continue!
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