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1/28/2015 c12 Anonymous
It's good so far, a few OOC moments, a little grammar trouble, but a little editing and it could be really good. Nice concept too. But maybe consolidate some of the chapters, just so that they have some more meat to them?
1/11/2015 c8 HelichrysaLavelle
I like it. c: I don't know what else to say. I'm really awkward with reviews...and in general. ;-;
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