for Stop All The Clocks1/12/2016 c7 
1Kou Shun'u
Greatly written scenes about and of emotions and understanding them. Very well done -all the perspectives.
1Kou Shun'uGreatly written scenes about and of emotions and understanding them. Very well done -all the perspectives.
1/12/2016 c6 Kou Shun'u
:( I wanted there to be 2 jemmas in rthe world and see how fitz navigates it.
Never was a fan of the two at once paradox theory. To me it it especially doesn't make sence when the two clearly have become different and in age especially. But that's the science I accept.
:( I wanted there to be 2 jemmas in rthe world and see how fitz navigates it.
Never was a fan of the two at once paradox theory. To me it it especially doesn't make sence when the two clearly have become different and in age especially. But that's the science I accept.
10/26/2015 c7 Guest
I'm not sure I can accurately describe or communicate my love for this story in a satisfactory way.
I'm not sure I can accurately describe or communicate my love for this story in a satisfactory way.
4/18/2015 c7 Beguilingirl
sorry I didn't leave more reviews. I was too busy reading straight through. Amazing story. I can't even tell you how many times I find myself holding my breath while they talked, not to mention the action sequences.
Fantastic job...
sorry I didn't leave more reviews. I was too busy reading straight through. Amazing story. I can't even tell you how many times I find myself holding my breath while they talked, not to mention the action sequences.
Fantastic job...
2/25/2015 c7 51DeadlineMaster
I love how well you portray Jemma's sadness over her feelings not being returned (as far as she thinks anyway) and I love that they came back together in the Bus- the place where they were essentially brought together in a semi-romantic state (sort of, I guess lol) I especially loved the ending. You did such a great job!
51DeadlineMasterI love how well you portray Jemma's sadness over her feelings not being returned (as far as she thinks anyway) and I love that they came back together in the Bus- the place where they were essentially brought together in a semi-romantic state (sort of, I guess lol) I especially loved the ending. You did such a great job!
2/22/2015 c6 asdfgh
update pls its amazing
update pls its amazing
2/12/2015 c6 185changingdestiny40
I've been reading this story and enjoying it very much. However, I wish May didn't leave older Simmons inside that portal. That was a horrible decision even if I understand her reasons. Please fix this so that older Simmons has a happy ending. If the laws of science could be defied in regards to changing the past, then surely the laws of science could also be defied in regards to two Jemma's existing within our world. So please fix this so that older Jemma also returns. Let a miracle happen for her. With all due respect, I feel like you made a poor decision by writing this outcome. But if you don't bring older Simmons back, please have either Fitz, younger Simmons, Skye or Mac punch May in the nose and disobey her for five months when she gives them orders. Good chapter except for it's ending and you have a very good day.
185changingdestiny40I've been reading this story and enjoying it very much. However, I wish May didn't leave older Simmons inside that portal. That was a horrible decision even if I understand her reasons. Please fix this so that older Simmons has a happy ending. If the laws of science could be defied in regards to changing the past, then surely the laws of science could also be defied in regards to two Jemma's existing within our world. So please fix this so that older Jemma also returns. Let a miracle happen for her. With all due respect, I feel like you made a poor decision by writing this outcome. But if you don't bring older Simmons back, please have either Fitz, younger Simmons, Skye or Mac punch May in the nose and disobey her for five months when she gives them orders. Good chapter except for it's ending and you have a very good day.
2/10/2015 c6 51DeadlineMaster
Wowza. That ending has such an emotional punch. Your heart really breaks for Fitz who is forced to make a devastating decision. Really a great chapter that is action packed and edge-of-your-seat good.
51DeadlineMasterWowza. That ending has such an emotional punch. Your heart really breaks for Fitz who is forced to make a devastating decision. Really a great chapter that is action packed and edge-of-your-seat good.
2/3/2015 c5 DeadlineMaster
All the truth bombs! Poor Fitz. I really felt for him having to deal with the disgruntled Future Jemma. And I loved how Past(?) Jemma was so upset, thinking that she was alone. And then Fitz having to admit that he'd prefer pastJemma. Guhhh! Can't wait to see where you go with this next!
All the truth bombs! Poor Fitz. I really felt for him having to deal with the disgruntled Future Jemma. And I loved how Past(?) Jemma was so upset, thinking that she was alone. And then Fitz having to admit that he'd prefer pastJemma. Guhhh! Can't wait to see where you go with this next!
2/2/2015 c5 Anna
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
2/2/2015 c5 Guest
Holy crack fire balls this is amazing please update soon!
Holy crack fire balls this is amazing please update soon!
1/31/2015 c4 10eckles
The 'Girl Who Waited' is one of my most favourite Doctor Who episodes, your amalgamation and incorporation of this story into AoS is first rate. Cannot wait to read chapter 5.
10ecklesThe 'Girl Who Waited' is one of my most favourite Doctor Who episodes, your amalgamation and incorporation of this story into AoS is first rate. Cannot wait to read chapter 5.
1/26/2015 c4 51DeadlineMaster
You did such a great job with the tension and the conflict building. You really get a sense of a different type of Jemma, which is obviously important in light of her having been there for so long. Poor Fitz, stuck with such a stubborn Jemma! lol
51DeadlineMasterYou did such a great job with the tension and the conflict building. You really get a sense of a different type of Jemma, which is obviously important in light of her having been there for so long. Poor Fitz, stuck with such a stubborn Jemma! lol