
1/26/2015 c4 Guest
Holy crap party stick! This is amazing, please update soon!
Holy crap party stick! This is amazing, please update soon!
1/21/2015 c3
51DeadlineMaster
I love the tension you've built from just a simple walk back to the Bus. Oh Hunter, so blind. lol I also like how you showcase Fitz's desperation to get Simmons back. So exciting!

I love the tension you've built from just a simple walk back to the Bus. Oh Hunter, so blind. lol I also like how you showcase Fitz's desperation to get Simmons back. So exciting!
1/19/2015 c3 Guest
Please please update soon
Please please update soon
1/15/2015 c2 Anna
This is absolutely amazing. I've watched 'the girl who waited' and I'm really excited to see how you let things play out here.
This is absolutely amazing. I've watched 'the girl who waited' and I'm really excited to see how you let things play out here.
1/14/2015 c2 Guest
Please update soon this is really good
Please update soon this is really good
1/13/2015 c1 Adela
this is amazing! i love it sooo much! it's so well written and it is just amazing. please update asap! i need to know what happened to her xx
this is amazing! i love it sooo much! it's so well written and it is just amazing. please update asap! i need to know what happened to her xx
1/13/2015 c2 Guest
This is fantastic! Easily one of the best fanfictions I've read. Please update soon!
This is fantastic! Easily one of the best fanfictions I've read. Please update soon!
1/12/2015 c2
51DeadlineMaster
You do such a great job of building up tension, you can really see and feel the panic in Fitz's words and actions. And of course, the cliffhanger...! You've been doing such a great job of tranferring the DW episode to the AOS world, I'm so impressed.

You do such a great job of building up tension, you can really see and feel the panic in Fitz's words and actions. And of course, the cliffhanger...! You've been doing such a great job of tranferring the DW episode to the AOS world, I'm so impressed.
1/6/2015 c1 Guest
Holy cheese balls! That was amazing, please update soon!
Holy cheese balls! That was amazing, please update soon!
1/6/2015 c1
51DeadlineMaster
I thought you did such a great job of building the tension between FitzSimmons and the way you are seamlessly connecting the DW episode to this is impressive! I can't wait to read more from this story! And a cliffhanger...! Torture!

I thought you did such a great job of building the tension between FitzSimmons and the way you are seamlessly connecting the DW episode to this is impressive! I can't wait to read more from this story! And a cliffhanger...! Torture!
1/6/2015 c1 mok
Ahhh this is beyond exciting. I'd love for an 084 to be like this
Ahhh this is beyond exciting. I'd love for an 084 to be like this
1/6/2015 c1 fzztsimmons
you have literally combined my two favourite things, Who and Fitzsimmons I could cry. And in all honesty I nearly did cry when reading about their feelings and fractured relationship, you've got it down to a T, and you express it so much better than they could even dream of doing on the show! Can't wait for the next chapter!
you have literally combined my two favourite things, Who and Fitzsimmons I could cry. And in all honesty I nearly did cry when reading about their feelings and fractured relationship, you've got it down to a T, and you express it so much better than they could even dream of doing on the show! Can't wait for the next chapter!