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4/6/2020 c6 reika88
you made your OC a BLONDE, of course she's gonna be weak. also if Paul was LIVING WITH HER WHY THE HELL WOULD HE KNOCK?! morron… you obviously didn't this OC through. you just made it the typical Blonde female being needing rescuing. also you need to do a thorough word check
8/8/2018 c7 meatpotatoes
chapter 7. she goes from buying a home together in one paragraph, giggling the next being proud of him in college, to the next paragraph unsure if they will last and if so it's only due to the imprint? This makes no sense at all...
8/8/2018 c7 meatpotatoes
Ok, so if they were all in the pack together, how had they not imprinted before, only when she came in for the holiday?
8/8/2018 c6 meatpotatoes
If she's also a shifter, how is she not able to overpower him?
6/29/2015 c34 Ella
1/20/2015 c2 polly2010
1/20/2015 c1 polly2010
Nice start!

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