
8/8/2023 c31
202Marcus Rowland
Umpteen Jack Slashes do not sound like a good idea, but given the nature of this story and the whole "the world is a story" thing it might just work.

Umpteen Jack Slashes do not sound like a good idea, but given the nature of this story and the whole "the world is a story" thing it might just work.
8/8/2023 c31
16zigmas
Can't wait for the finale, loool.
I guess you're going to SLASH Ze Golden Boy TAYPRI-style, and then finish him off as usual.
Kinda slightly underwhelming to see the same method being used over and over again, but, well, it WORKS.
Also, I strongly imagine the SHOCK on BLAH-sto's face when he learns WHO exactly he was mouthing at, lol.
Because reasons, of course.
LOL!

Can't wait for the finale, loool.
I guess you're going to SLASH Ze Golden Boy TAYPRI-style, and then finish him off as usual.
Kinda slightly underwhelming to see the same method being used over and over again, but, well, it WORKS.
Also, I strongly imagine the SHOCK on BLAH-sto's face when he learns WHO exactly he was mouthing at, lol.
Because reasons, of course.
LOL!
7/23/2023 c28
2Exivus
I think you did a bit of an oopsie there. In the beginning of the chapter Amy refers to Bonesaw as Riley Grace. In the boardwalk scene, Michael refers to her as Riley Davis.

I think you did a bit of an oopsie there. In the beginning of the chapter Amy refers to Bonesaw as Riley Grace. In the boardwalk scene, Michael refers to her as Riley Davis.
7/10/2023 c16 Pen NameG
mmmmmka. just pointing out a discrepancy here so a few chapters ago Alexandria doored directly to Bakuda to capture/recruit her and now she dies in this chapter. which uhhhh wouldn't happen if she was with cauldron.
just confused y'know. still a fun read otherwise
mmmmmka. just pointing out a discrepancy here so a few chapters ago Alexandria doored directly to Bakuda to capture/recruit her and now she dies in this chapter. which uhhhh wouldn't happen if she was with cauldron.
just confused y'know. still a fun read otherwise
7/3/2023 c30
10RevDorothyL
I adore snarky Panacea, with Mike as a mental mentor and armchair quarterback advising and encouraging her. Plus, it's great to see the ripples along the way, especially when other characters get a better break than in canon.

I adore snarky Panacea, with Mike as a mental mentor and armchair quarterback advising and encouraging her. Plus, it's great to see the ripples along the way, especially when other characters get a better break than in canon.
5/5/2023 c30 Guest
Did this really get abandoned on the second to last chapter? Really?
Did this really get abandoned on the second to last chapter? Really?
2/14/2023 c30 Mandarin
just finished binging security! and I, panacea I love your work!
just finished binging security! and I, panacea I love your work!
2/16/2023 c30 Firelink Set
im kinda sad to see this story go but glad that ill be able to experience the ending
im kinda sad to see this story go but glad that ill be able to experience the ending
2/13/2023 c23
10Themightytom
You know i love everything about this story, but I have to point out that in the scene where Contessa takes down Saint, we'll have to assume that Earth bet doesn't use a QWERTY keyboard because if the "Last thing you see is the "N" then the thing you'd feel right before that is probably four forehead hitting the "Y"
Rest in peace Dragon.

You know i love everything about this story, but I have to point out that in the scene where Contessa takes down Saint, we'll have to assume that Earth bet doesn't use a QWERTY keyboard because if the "Last thing you see is the "N" then the thing you'd feel right before that is probably four forehead hitting the "Y"
Rest in peace Dragon.