12/11/2022 c12 CMVreud
I hope someone clocks Brian somewhat fiercely on the kisser. Or deletes his melanin count.
That bloody, useless...
I hope someone clocks Brian somewhat fiercely on the kisser. Or deletes his melanin count.
That bloody, useless...
12/11/2022 c11 CMVreud
Really, Grue?
REALLY!? GRUE!
*every facepalm in the entirety of Star Treck: TNG*
Really, Grue?
REALLY!? GRUE!
*every facepalm in the entirety of Star Treck: TNG*
12/11/2022 c5 CMVreud
I don't know. Is that a fist bumb or a high five for Mark?
Because, mad cred for the continuity here.
I don't know. Is that a fist bumb or a high five for Mark?
Because, mad cred for the continuity here.
12/10/2022 c4 CMVreud
Tattletale clutched her forehead. "Argh! Ow!"
When Tattle is writing this... Is she f- messing with herself?
Tattletale clutched her forehead. "Argh! Ow!"
When Tattle is writing this... Is she f- messing with herself?
10/3/2022 c29 SnoodleBooper
Binged all this in a day. Need more.
Binged all this in a day. Need more.
10/3/2022 c27 Guest
Max broke his promise. No attacking innocent minorities.
Max broke his promise. No attacking innocent minorities.
9/27/2022 c29 SunAndStars
Panacea: Director Piggot, I want to help you recruit the Undersiders to the Wards, they also have a new member in and I’ll pretty sure Madcap, I mean Assault, will be interested in this conversation.
Piggot: What.
Panacea: I’m also sure Chief Director Costa-Brown will likely agree with whatever I say...
Trooper: I knew it! Panacea was calling the shots!
If troopers and PHO already know about Alexandria taking down the Nine, any chance that the crowd who was present at Jack’s defeat saw that Panacea was there too? The public and PRT saw Panacea take down the Fallen on a bus ride, and guards already know orders from above came to approve Panacea to not just visit but release Bonesaw. By now, I’m surprised New Wave hasn’t heard what she and occasionally Victoria has done. If they react poorly, Panacea can truly go rogue and recruit the Undersiders as her gang/subordinates/guards, maybe she can invite Canary, even after a Not Guilty the poor girl has no friends left so knowing who may have helped her would be nice.
Panacea: Brandish thinks Marquis old organization came for me, as if I’ll be so unoriginal. Did you know they attacked him at his own home, and abducted his child?
Piggot: What.
I would just like to point out that while we’ve dealt with Coil and the ABB, as Amy pointed out before the Merchants are still free to do whatever they want and the Empire has not faced any public reckoning to stop them from acting out against Hookwolf’s arrest or Kaiser’s orders. Maybe this Skidmark is a more chill version with no interest in expanding his influence but I can’t see Michael not at least checking in on the guy, especially not after the unexpected gang war in his previous experience. Maybe this time, Faultline’s Crew can get involved sooner.
Panacea: There are rumours already out that I was present in Jack Slash’s death and when Alexandria got caught in a time bubble, I have funds that may or may not be from a PRT source and I want you to do a job for me.
Your Panacea, with Michael’s influence, is amazing and I love how she’s helping so many people. She got to be awesome saving Dinah and Noelle (not to mention the Travellers), she got to call out Shadow Stalker and Cauldron (my only compliant is she’s only calling out Alexandria, although Eidolon hasn’t met her yet), and she does get to reveal that she knows about the Endbringers and Scion. So looking forward to how you plan to conclude all the loose ends and end this story!
Panacea: Director Piggot, I want to help you recruit the Undersiders to the Wards, they also have a new member in and I’ll pretty sure Madcap, I mean Assault, will be interested in this conversation.
Piggot: What.
Panacea: I’m also sure Chief Director Costa-Brown will likely agree with whatever I say...
Trooper: I knew it! Panacea was calling the shots!
If troopers and PHO already know about Alexandria taking down the Nine, any chance that the crowd who was present at Jack’s defeat saw that Panacea was there too? The public and PRT saw Panacea take down the Fallen on a bus ride, and guards already know orders from above came to approve Panacea to not just visit but release Bonesaw. By now, I’m surprised New Wave hasn’t heard what she and occasionally Victoria has done. If they react poorly, Panacea can truly go rogue and recruit the Undersiders as her gang/subordinates/guards, maybe she can invite Canary, even after a Not Guilty the poor girl has no friends left so knowing who may have helped her would be nice.
Panacea: Brandish thinks Marquis old organization came for me, as if I’ll be so unoriginal. Did you know they attacked him at his own home, and abducted his child?
Piggot: What.
I would just like to point out that while we’ve dealt with Coil and the ABB, as Amy pointed out before the Merchants are still free to do whatever they want and the Empire has not faced any public reckoning to stop them from acting out against Hookwolf’s arrest or Kaiser’s orders. Maybe this Skidmark is a more chill version with no interest in expanding his influence but I can’t see Michael not at least checking in on the guy, especially not after the unexpected gang war in his previous experience. Maybe this time, Faultline’s Crew can get involved sooner.
Panacea: There are rumours already out that I was present in Jack Slash’s death and when Alexandria got caught in a time bubble, I have funds that may or may not be from a PRT source and I want you to do a job for me.
Your Panacea, with Michael’s influence, is amazing and I love how she’s helping so many people. She got to be awesome saving Dinah and Noelle (not to mention the Travellers), she got to call out Shadow Stalker and Cauldron (my only compliant is she’s only calling out Alexandria, although Eidolon hasn’t met her yet), and she does get to reveal that she knows about the Endbringers and Scion. So looking forward to how you plan to conclude all the loose ends and end this story!
9/17/2022 c25 Raphielle
Those damn teens, constantly complaining about instantly lobotomizing people because they "have places to be" and "realistically can't commit murder".
Those damn teens, constantly complaining about instantly lobotomizing people because they "have places to be" and "realistically can't commit murder".
9/2/2022 c29 rdixiemiller
Outstanding piece of work. It’s a real pity that it didn’t get finished.
Maybe someday?
Outstanding piece of work. It’s a real pity that it didn’t get finished.
Maybe someday?
8/20/2022 c29 Betty
You updated! I swear it feels like years! Aw, the story is almost over, I hope you get to cover everything you’ve alluded to in this story! All those mentions of Alec’s family background, are we going to see Heartbreaker or even Cherie dealt with? Will we see Canary be happy, or the PRT characters who were talking about Alexandria learning they were right, New Wave knowing what their healer has been up to, the cops mistreating Brian getting called out, Theo and Hookwolf learning about Kaiser giving them up, Eidolon finally meeting Amy/Michael and getting told why he needs therapy, and probably a whole bunch of stuff that you’ve built up in your excellent story. Looking forward to your next update!
You updated! I swear it feels like years! Aw, the story is almost over, I hope you get to cover everything you’ve alluded to in this story! All those mentions of Alec’s family background, are we going to see Heartbreaker or even Cherie dealt with? Will we see Canary be happy, or the PRT characters who were talking about Alexandria learning they were right, New Wave knowing what their healer has been up to, the cops mistreating Brian getting called out, Theo and Hookwolf learning about Kaiser giving them up, Eidolon finally meeting Amy/Michael and getting told why he needs therapy, and probably a whole bunch of stuff that you’ve built up in your excellent story. Looking forward to your next update!
8/20/2022 c29 Guest
I love this update, think you’ve done a great job with it! The Undersiders taking in Bonesaw! Would love to see them warm up to her, and if they ever get over their heads, their innocent newcomer starts threatening their enemies with hints on just who she is...you’ve written Purity getting her chance, let Bonesaw too! Plus if Imp ever joins in this story, would love to see how she can get along with her brother’s new serial killer friend. The Undersiders are no longer a villain gang, maybe time to go rogue and get rid of the Empire since Amy only promised she won’t be the one going after them? Brian as leader of the Undersiders will drive them crazy, speaking of which I hope Amy makes those cops answer for what they were doing to him.
I am curious, are you going to follow up with those troopers who previously guessed (correctly) how Amy was stepping up and giving Alexandria instructions? The words were “the damage had been done”, what damage? If more people know about how much of a BAMF that Amy is, even the rest of New Wave can’t deny her, and I’ll love to see their reactions when they learn what Amy’s been up to.
One thing I might have missed: Why did Alexandria help Amy threaten Kaiser, as he said he’s not high enough to get her attention? She got a phone call before, who was that?
I love this update, think you’ve done a great job with it! The Undersiders taking in Bonesaw! Would love to see them warm up to her, and if they ever get over their heads, their innocent newcomer starts threatening their enemies with hints on just who she is...you’ve written Purity getting her chance, let Bonesaw too! Plus if Imp ever joins in this story, would love to see how she can get along with her brother’s new serial killer friend. The Undersiders are no longer a villain gang, maybe time to go rogue and get rid of the Empire since Amy only promised she won’t be the one going after them? Brian as leader of the Undersiders will drive them crazy, speaking of which I hope Amy makes those cops answer for what they were doing to him.
I am curious, are you going to follow up with those troopers who previously guessed (correctly) how Amy was stepping up and giving Alexandria instructions? The words were “the damage had been done”, what damage? If more people know about how much of a BAMF that Amy is, even the rest of New Wave can’t deny her, and I’ll love to see their reactions when they learn what Amy’s been up to.
One thing I might have missed: Why did Alexandria help Amy threaten Kaiser, as he said he’s not high enough to get her attention? She got a phone call before, who was that?