for I, Panacea8/20/2022 c29 Guest
I love this update, think you’ve done a great job with it! The Undersiders taking in Bonesaw! Would love to see them warm up to her, and if they ever get over their heads, their innocent newcomer starts threatening their enemies with hints on just who she is...you’ve written Purity getting her chance, let Bonesaw too! Plus if Imp ever joins in this story, would love to see how she can get along with her brother’s new serial killer friend. The Undersiders are no longer a villain gang, maybe time to go rogue and get rid of the Empire since Amy only promised she won’t be the one going after them? Brian as leader of the Undersiders will drive them crazy, speaking of which I hope Amy makes those cops answer for what they were doing to him.
I am curious, are you going to follow up with those troopers who previously guessed (correctly) how Amy was stepping up and giving Alexandria instructions? The words were “the damage had been done”, what damage? If more people know about how much of a BAMF that Amy is, even the rest of New Wave can’t deny her, and I’ll love to see their reactions when they learn what Amy’s been up to.
One thing I might have missed: Why did Alexandria help Amy threaten Kaiser, as he said he’s not high enough to get her attention? She got a phone call before, who was that?
I love this update, think you’ve done a great job with it! The Undersiders taking in Bonesaw! Would love to see them warm up to her, and if they ever get over their heads, their innocent newcomer starts threatening their enemies with hints on just who she is...you’ve written Purity getting her chance, let Bonesaw too! Plus if Imp ever joins in this story, would love to see how she can get along with her brother’s new serial killer friend. The Undersiders are no longer a villain gang, maybe time to go rogue and get rid of the Empire since Amy only promised she won’t be the one going after them? Brian as leader of the Undersiders will drive them crazy, speaking of which I hope Amy makes those cops answer for what they were doing to him.
I am curious, are you going to follow up with those troopers who previously guessed (correctly) how Amy was stepping up and giving Alexandria instructions? The words were “the damage had been done”, what damage? If more people know about how much of a BAMF that Amy is, even the rest of New Wave can’t deny her, and I’ll love to see their reactions when they learn what Amy’s been up to.
One thing I might have missed: Why did Alexandria help Amy threaten Kaiser, as he said he’s not high enough to get her attention? She got a phone call before, who was that?
8/21/2022 c5 Mr.Destructo
"Upstairs," he told her, without looking back. "So you can have your discussion in peace."
what a sick burn haha
"Upstairs," he told her, without looking back. "So you can have your discussion in peace."
what a sick burn haha
8/16/2022 c29 
2Jack Inqu
I didn't expect Riley to join the Undersiders. I wonder what the plan is there, other than socialize and normalize her faster.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
2Jack InquI didn't expect Riley to join the Undersiders. I wonder what the plan is there, other than socialize and normalize her faster.
Take care, good luck, stay safe, stay healthy, and I look forward to your next update.
8/14/2022 c29 jay maechtlen
Good stuff as always. Strange things happening to make the world better.
Good stuff as always. Strange things happening to make the world better.
8/14/2022 c29 Guest
So cool
Some studies show profanity in stress is healthy
Using the actual English words of the actual English common folk makes you an uncouth slob pleb but okay to use words of not all that English Norman aristocrats why exactly?
So cool
Some studies show profanity in stress is healthy
Using the actual English words of the actual English common folk makes you an uncouth slob pleb but okay to use words of not all that English Norman aristocrats why exactly?
8/15/2022 c29 Armiture
Woo, I can see what you meant in your AN2 up top. Not easy plotlines to deal with, not at all. Though I liked that last amusing scene with Piggot and Assault to cut through the heavy funk left by the rest of the chapter. Dealing with a recovering Bonesaw isn't something warm and fuzzy but you handled it well, as you did in Security.
That said, thanks for the update and I hope you don't think I'm greedy for hoping it takes three chapters or more to fully wrap things up. I love reading your stories.
Woo, I can see what you meant in your AN2 up top. Not easy plotlines to deal with, not at all. Though I liked that last amusing scene with Piggot and Assault to cut through the heavy funk left by the rest of the chapter. Dealing with a recovering Bonesaw isn't something warm and fuzzy but you handled it well, as you did in Security.
That said, thanks for the update and I hope you don't think I'm greedy for hoping it takes three chapters or more to fully wrap things up. I love reading your stories.
8/15/2022 c29 Lesto Vetrois
Loved the chapter! Thanks for updating it. It was a blast re-reading the last chapter and this one.
Oh God, Ryley will suck so much at FPS... It's freaking impossible for newcomers to move and aim at the same time on the controller. She will not bave fun
Loved the chapter! Thanks for updating it. It was a blast re-reading the last chapter and this one.
Oh God, Ryley will suck so much at FPS... It's freaking impossible for newcomers to move and aim at the same time on the controller. She will not bave fun
8/15/2022 c29 3Gizmo Gear
Awesome new chapter!
I'm glad to see Riley getting a new lease on life. She deserves that much.
3Gizmo GearAwesome new chapter!
I'm glad to see Riley getting a new lease on life. She deserves that much.
8/14/2022 c29 8Quathis
Quite the bomb to drop on people all of a sudden, even if it is considered for the best. At least she's purged of being Jack's "good girl" and anything else of his. Wondering just what kind of collaboration they could pull off. Until next time.
8QuathisQuite the bomb to drop on people all of a sudden, even if it is considered for the best. At least she's purged of being Jack's "good girl" and anything else of his. Wondering just what kind of collaboration they could pull off. Until next time.
8/14/2022 c29 1Draco0905
you got ANY IDEA how many women are about to have to keep promises they never meant to give out in tge first place because they wanted to be a smartass? i read that part and just imagined large pink wingless bees buzzing about frantically. still buzzing with no wings made no sense but that's my imagination for ya.
1Draco0905you got ANY IDEA how many women are about to have to keep promises they never meant to give out in tge first place because they wanted to be a smartass? i read that part and just imagined large pink wingless bees buzzing about frantically. still buzzing with no wings made no sense but that's my imagination for ya.