1/25 c4 scyfly
its a good thing coil is not a control freak or this place wouldve been bugged to hell and back
its a good thing coil is not a control freak or this place wouldve been bugged to hell and back
1/25 c3 scyfly
i think we are at count 6 for ppl asking what is wrong with amy, which is laying it in far too tick. in this world abberant behavior means MS, not repeating the question
i think we are at count 6 for ppl asking what is wrong with amy, which is laying it in far too tick. in this world abberant behavior means MS, not repeating the question
1/25 c2 scyfly
this is a whole next lvl of angst, the back and forward is so exaggerated it cant be anything but meant to be annoying.
i was hoping for this to be someone who had the chance to creatively use her power but with all the whining i doubt thats gonna happen anytime soon.
this is a whole next lvl of angst, the back and forward is so exaggerated it cant be anything but meant to be annoying.
i was hoping for this to be someone who had the chance to creatively use her power but with all the whining i doubt thats gonna happen anytime soon.
12/26/2023 c17 Nothingburger
Why is the undersiders dealing with Bakuda and Oni Lee when Alexandria said door to Bakuda at coils base and stepped through to deal with her?
Why is the undersiders dealing with Bakuda and Oni Lee when Alexandria said door to Bakuda at coils base and stepped through to deal with her?
11/30/2023 c20 Kasikan
Overall the chapter wasn't bad, but you missed one major point in the recording. It was recorded by the person they had called, which they consented to. If someone attacks a person on the phone and the person they're on the phone with records it, it can be used in a court of law. You don't need consent from the party that attacks you while you're on the phone for it to be used. So they could completely destroy them all with that recording without having to settle it outside of a courtroom. In fact, they'd probably want to take it to court and have Alan disbarred. It'd bring everyone who was guilty down properly and not let them get away with it. Like Alan and the PRT handler were guilty and will likely get away with it for the most part. PRT agent may get fired, but won't face criminal charges for aiding and abetting with all the assaults she covered up. Same with Alan, he'll just go to work like nothing happened unless the place he works at fires him. Even then he can always go to another law firm. Better to have him disbarred and have his daughter arrested.
Overall the chapter wasn't bad, but you missed one major point in the recording. It was recorded by the person they had called, which they consented to. If someone attacks a person on the phone and the person they're on the phone with records it, it can be used in a court of law. You don't need consent from the party that attacks you while you're on the phone for it to be used. So they could completely destroy them all with that recording without having to settle it outside of a courtroom. In fact, they'd probably want to take it to court and have Alan disbarred. It'd bring everyone who was guilty down properly and not let them get away with it. Like Alan and the PRT handler were guilty and will likely get away with it for the most part. PRT agent may get fired, but won't face criminal charges for aiding and abetting with all the assaults she covered up. Same with Alan, he'll just go to work like nothing happened unless the place he works at fires him. Even then he can always go to another law firm. Better to have him disbarred and have his daughter arrested.