
8/10/2023 c33 Armiture
I wasn't too worried about the Jacobs, they seemed much more "grounded" to me than their progenitor. Still it was nice to see that they worked things out and I thought the meta of making this story a fanfic by Lisa in the Security!Verse was a hoot! Kudos for that.
I wasn't too worried about the Jacobs, they seemed much more "grounded" to me than their progenitor. Still it was nice to see that they worked things out and I thought the meta of making this story a fanfic by Lisa in the Security!Verse was a hoot! Kudos for that.
8/10/2023 c33 Sebine
Blasto died unceremoniously.
The Jake's are going to... Jake, but not from State Farm.
good story bro
Blasto died unceremoniously.
The Jake's are going to... Jake, but not from State Farm.
good story bro
8/10/2023 c33 evilstatistic19
Good chapter looking forward to the next one. Thanks for giving us an epilogue and tying up some loose ends.
Good chapter looking forward to the next one. Thanks for giving us an epilogue and tying up some loose ends.
8/10/2023 c32 Armiture
An abrupt yet satisfying ending, kudos for that. Michael Allen is one sneaky guy and for a variation of his original plan, it worked out quite well. I hope the Jacobs don't cause too much trouble on that instance of Earth-bet.
Thanks for the conclusion of your long-running story, I was a little surprised to see it had been running for eight and a half years.
An abrupt yet satisfying ending, kudos for that. Michael Allen is one sneaky guy and for a variation of his original plan, it worked out quite well. I hope the Jacobs don't cause too much trouble on that instance of Earth-bet.
Thanks for the conclusion of your long-running story, I was a little surprised to see it had been running for eight and a half years.
8/8/2023 c31 Guest
so cool
so cool
8/10/2023 c32
2CMVreud
Sarah, no, Lisa, FFFFfffffuuuuuuuuuuu**, you nearly gave me a coronary with Blasto and his own Jack/copy there, didya.
And still, self-praise stinks. Or could you've done what you've done if you hadn't had all the puzzles parts cut out and ready for you?
But in one thing you were right, no smug is bad, bad Lisa, ehrm, and that was that the first plan had too many moving parts.
An all around wonder-fucking-ful story.

Sarah, no, Lisa, FFFFfffffuuuuuuuuuuu**, you nearly gave me a coronary with Blasto and his own Jack/copy there, didya.
And still, self-praise stinks. Or could you've done what you've done if you hadn't had all the puzzles parts cut out and ready for you?
But in one thing you were right, no smug is bad, bad Lisa, ehrm, and that was that the first plan had too many moving parts.
An all around wonder-fucking-ful story.
8/10/2023 c31 CMVreud
How he said it? "I love it when a plan comes together."
And it's still a total SI-Mary-Sue-story.
Don't think I forget that you write, Sarah.
How he said it? "I love it when a plan comes together."
And it's still a total SI-Mary-Sue-story.
Don't think I forget that you write, Sarah.
8/10/2023 c32 Ninja4hir3
And so, the day is saved. Thanks to Bakuda...Blasto...Bonesaw...twenty clones of Jack Slash... and the voice in Panacea's head? What a timeline...
it does feel weird to get to the end of one of these stories that has been around for a while. What a ride it has been though.
And so, the day is saved. Thanks to Bakuda...Blasto...Bonesaw...twenty clones of Jack Slash... and the voice in Panacea's head? What a timeline...
it does feel weird to get to the end of one of these stories that has been around for a while. What a ride it has been though.
8/9/2023 c32
2Jack Inqu
Interesting ending. There are still major threats out there, and Mike is gone, but the Endbringers and Scion have all been neutralized. That's a BIG step back from the brink, so the world has a much better fighting chance.
Thanks for the story; take care, good luck, stay safe, and stay healthy.

Interesting ending. There are still major threats out there, and Mike is gone, but the Endbringers and Scion have all been neutralized. That's a BIG step back from the brink, so the world has a much better fighting chance.
Thanks for the story; take care, good luck, stay safe, and stay healthy.