for The Hobbit: Retold1/9/2015 c1 
5JuliaPossum
Eeeeee!
When I saw this in my inbox I was like, what is this? Then I realized it was the Hobbit and I was like eeeeeeee!
You're such a good writer, you really bring life into the words.
I think I found a few spelling mistakes, but it was just an of spellt like and if and there was a weird word closer to the begining that had a letter replaced with a comma, but other than that, it was awesome!
I can't wait to see more!
5JuliaPossumEeeeee!
When I saw this in my inbox I was like, what is this? Then I realized it was the Hobbit and I was like eeeeeeee!
You're such a good writer, you really bring life into the words.
I think I found a few spelling mistakes, but it was just an of spellt like and if and there was a weird word closer to the begining that had a letter replaced with a comma, but other than that, it was awesome!
I can't wait to see more!