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3/21/2018 c1 M.A.N
Proto-terrangenetically/psionically enhanced Terran
Terro-zerginfested Terran
Marine type
Proto-terran:Noble warriors
Melee attack: psionic blade
Ranged attack: XC-30 particle rifle
Defense:ion shield, hardened vanadium bio-steel armour
Terro-zerg: infested Marines
Melee attack: razor sharp maw
Ranged attack: infested C-25 Gauss rifle.
Defense: vanadium/carapace hybrid armour.
1/14/2015 c2 1grayiron
Great chapter I look forward to the next one.
1/12/2015 c1 1Dimachaeron
Wow. There is an incredible depth to the mythology you've created behind this joint universe. I can only hope that future chapters will expand on the glimpse we've been given here. Personally, I would advise putting a small line or something to indicate the scene change, as it was not immediately apparent to me that the story had changed perspectives. It only takes a few sentences to realize, but it is somewhat jarring nonetheless. You have my attention :)
1/11/2015 c1 1grayiron
I like the first chapter I look forward to reading the next one. Question thoe, are you going to have them appear during the time REVEN was alive or during the time when the Empire was in power?

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