7/25/2021 c1 1heavenly777protector
this was an incredibly strange trip through the warp... but most important how is a MARS class battlecruiser in the US Navy?
this was an incredibly strange trip through the warp... but most important how is a MARS class battlecruiser in the US Navy?
6/18/2017 c1 shadow
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
4/13/2016 c1 44Touhoufanatic
interesting idea, both the war-hammer and using the American side or it. if you update more of this i'll look forward to it.
(id say more but most of it has been said by other,so i'll keep my trap shut for now.)
interesting idea, both the war-hammer and using the American side or it. if you update more of this i'll look forward to it.
(id say more but most of it has been said by other,so i'll keep my trap shut for now.)
10/18/2015 c1 Warwolf82
I just found your story, and it look good for now, story, event, even people look good, hope your gonna update or make another chapter, keep going, guy.
I just found your story, and it look good for now, story, event, even people look good, hope your gonna update or make another chapter, keep going, guy.
9/2/2015 c1 The One and Only MUDKIP
Hey, will this be updated anytime soon? I'm rating it a Ten out if Ten. Rep.
Hey, will this be updated anytime soon? I'm rating it a Ten out if Ten. Rep.
5/3/2015 c1 Blackholelord
Okay this looks rather good. With the guy in the fleet, they might finally have a chance to push the enemy back, and maybe finally inflict big enough damage to put a stop to the enemy forces. Considering the size of the ship is from Warhammer 40k, have you consider making him a hybrid ship, basically part carrier, carrying human fighters from Warhammer 40k? Also nice job making his ship body armor better looking, basically the power armor.
Okay this looks rather good. With the guy in the fleet, they might finally have a chance to push the enemy back, and maybe finally inflict big enough damage to put a stop to the enemy forces. Considering the size of the ship is from Warhammer 40k, have you consider making him a hybrid ship, basically part carrier, carrying human fighters from Warhammer 40k? Also nice job making his ship body armor better looking, basically the power armor.
1/23/2015 c1 2zergdramon
I'm surprised the guy didn't fire his torpedoes yet...
OH and an Exterminatus Grade Ammunition!
I'm surprised the guy didn't fire his torpedoes yet...
OH and an Exterminatus Grade Ammunition!
1/10/2015 c1 Visorak
Aside from the disparate power levels (An Imperial warship's Void Shields can take repeated impacts from Lance Batteries and Macrocannons with not actually that much damage [given that space battles can last days), and Lances are weapons that are basically directed nuclear weapons that can obliterate cities with a single blast. Fire from a 5-inch (127mm, about the size of modern tank guns) cannon wouldn't actually do that much damage, if it could even dent the adamantium plating that forms the ship's armour), I'd like to nitpick a few things.
First, iirc, most warships' void shields are arranged in banks and can cycle once they're depleted, and even a single of those shields can take several blasts from Lances and the like, something far beyond the power level of conventional ship weapons. Just mentioning the shield banks mainly.
As a second point, a Nova Cannon's blast can envelop several ships with a single shot, with a blast of plasma the size of a small planetoid. Unless the gun has been severely downgraded, firing it in atmopshere would lead to what is essentially an Exterminatus for the planet, and would certainly cause horrible tsunamis, even if it was downgraded, by the sheer power of the shot.
Regardless, that's just me ranting a bit. Awesome idea, actually, and I wait to see more.
Aside from the disparate power levels (An Imperial warship's Void Shields can take repeated impacts from Lance Batteries and Macrocannons with not actually that much damage [given that space battles can last days), and Lances are weapons that are basically directed nuclear weapons that can obliterate cities with a single blast. Fire from a 5-inch (127mm, about the size of modern tank guns) cannon wouldn't actually do that much damage, if it could even dent the adamantium plating that forms the ship's armour), I'd like to nitpick a few things.
First, iirc, most warships' void shields are arranged in banks and can cycle once they're depleted, and even a single of those shields can take several blasts from Lances and the like, something far beyond the power level of conventional ship weapons. Just mentioning the shield banks mainly.
As a second point, a Nova Cannon's blast can envelop several ships with a single shot, with a blast of plasma the size of a small planetoid. Unless the gun has been severely downgraded, firing it in atmopshere would lead to what is essentially an Exterminatus for the planet, and would certainly cause horrible tsunamis, even if it was downgraded, by the sheer power of the shot.
Regardless, that's just me ranting a bit. Awesome idea, actually, and I wait to see more.
1/10/2015 c1 aznxa21
Well this seems... Interesting, not sure how I feel about it yet. I'm not very familiar with the Kantai series.
Well this seems... Interesting, not sure how I feel about it yet. I'm not very familiar with the Kantai series.
1/10/2015 c1 pan0ply
I'm actually surprised at the main character's relative lack of durability considering the fact that he's a ship from 40K. The scale of the ships there is so immense that I was actually expecting his Void Shields to only take minor damage.
Also, did you change KanColle lore a little? It has been a very, very long time since I last looked up anything relating to KanColle, but I actually thought that Ship-girls were somehow built, not conscripted from ordinary citizens who can operate these "outfits".
I'm actually surprised at the main character's relative lack of durability considering the fact that he's a ship from 40K. The scale of the ships there is so immense that I was actually expecting his Void Shields to only take minor damage.
Also, did you change KanColle lore a little? It has been a very, very long time since I last looked up anything relating to KanColle, but I actually thought that Ship-girls were somehow built, not conscripted from ordinary citizens who can operate these "outfits".