
3/6/2015 c9
202ChloeRhiannonX
Hmm I understand why you finished it where you did, though I really must raise the point of how unrealistic it got. I highly doubt a gang of 15 year olds were able to illegally smuggle a 13 year old out of the country on a fake passport, especially without the cops getting involved, double especially since Duncans whole family were cops. But other than that, I'm looking forward to the sequel (:

Hmm I understand why you finished it where you did, though I really must raise the point of how unrealistic it got. I highly doubt a gang of 15 year olds were able to illegally smuggle a 13 year old out of the country on a fake passport, especially without the cops getting involved, double especially since Duncans whole family were cops. But other than that, I'm looking forward to the sequel (:
3/6/2015 c9
18ChrisMcLean-Cody-Duncan-TD
If anybody cares to read this, I've decided the book'll be called He's Never Gone.

If anybody cares to read this, I've decided the book'll be called He's Never Gone.
3/5/2015 c7
202ChloeRhiannonX
Chris is great comedic relief in this. I hope they get Duncan back in one piece!

Chris is great comedic relief in this. I hope they get Duncan back in one piece!
1/20/2015 c4 ChloeRhiannonX
"At least your boyfriend's a criminal, and not a female gymnast" No but can you imagine Duncan as a female gymnast, it'd be so awesome XD Im really enjoying this so far, can't wait to see where it goes (:
"At least your boyfriend's a criminal, and not a female gymnast" No but can you imagine Duncan as a female gymnast, it'd be so awesome XD Im really enjoying this so far, can't wait to see where it goes (:
1/20/2015 c3 ChloeRhiannonX
"you'll probably see grass at some stage in your life, and you might as well be prepared for it" I laughed so hard at this!
"you'll probably see grass at some stage in your life, and you might as well be prepared for it" I laughed so hard at this!
1/20/2015 c2 ChloeRhiannonX
The just seems kinda random and awkward...I love it! Can't wait to see what you have planned.
The just seems kinda random and awkward...I love it! Can't wait to see what you have planned.
1/20/2015 c1 ChloeRhiannonX
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...literally my reaction to this entire chapter was just me screaming XD
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh...literally my reaction to this entire chapter was just me screaming XD