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10/21/2015 c1 3Frick6101719
I stumbled across this little story rather indirectly, and let me tell you it smarts like a punch in the nose. It's beautiful, really it is. The emotion is potent without being over-the-top dramatic, and the balance of description, introspection, and conversation creates a very vivid and realistic scene. Honestly, I can't believe so few people have found this little gem; I'm sure if more knew about this they would love it (the kind of way you love something when it's ripping your heart out) as immediately as I did.
Flawless, my friend. Keep up the great work!
Much love,
-Frick
9/15/2015 c1 29Rachelle Lo
Very nice piece. Good prose.
1/11/2015 c1 11FebruarySong
This is lovely, and dare I say, worlds better than the scene we were given in the movie. I did not like the Tauriel/Kili romance, but the understated way you handled Tauriel's grief here made me well with tears. And of course, Thranduil's long sorrow for his wife was beautifully done, too. Thank you for writing this!

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