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11/19/2020 c14 ThePruld
Jesus Christ, another fic ruined by Hinata's toxic presence. I can't go on reading this, sorry.
11/14/2020 c10 3AadenHelan
Wow hinata did a good job huh after all those training, if she doesn't train at all, i'm pretty sure she will be the same in this chapter. useless.

and don't make a tired excuse, she's tired not blood loss, all she do in this chapter is being like someone who never fight, if i was Naruto in this chapter i will throw her away.

you never fight do you?
11/14/2020 c5 AadenHelan
You focusing physical aspects and giving up chakra in the world of chakra and people spitting fire everyday? what are you trying to make a Saitama? do you really think a Roman soldiers historically accurate or fiction can fight against people spitting fire and making round tornado and can enchanting their body with Chakra and running like a car? why don't you make Konoha civilians start french revolution against the shinobi when you're at it?
11/11/2020 c5 amateurficaddict
lost me when naruto decided to give up chakra based warfare. makes the story unrealistic. I agree with Scott. ceasar would use everything at his disposal.
11/11/2020 c5 17Scott the Wanderer
Again the disparaging of Jutsu is stupid. Caesar would be all over it like white on rice. He would also adapt his fighting style to match the era. A traditional Roman Legion is fine against other soldier, but Rock Lee or Tenten would straight up murder them by the hundreds. Caesar would not even attempt to take traditional Roman Legionnaires against chakra empowered ninja as it would be a waste of resources. He would create his own chakra armies and he'd encourage team and collaborative jutsu as well as traditional martial might.

The idea of Roman Naruto is interesting, and could be well done, but to be done credibly Naruto would not abandon what he knows works. He'd be making it better.
11/11/2020 c4 Scott the Wanderer
It seems rather short sighted for Naruto to focus purely on the physical aspect of warfare. If Julius Caesar had access to Chakra he'd use it. He'd actually train his soldiers till they could use the basic three and likely water walking and tree climbing as well. It would be too incredibly useful for him not to exploit and he'd kill the first person who said they should just concentrate on weapons skill.
11/7/2020 c20 bastidaswilliam2005
well if you must do it but the story was great as it was waiting for the nex chapter and the death of the snake plus seing sasuke sufer in the training
11/1/2020 c2 Guest
kurenai already seems like a fucking cunt
11/1/2020 c1 Guest
imagine thinking roman soldiers could do shit to anyone on the ninja continent omegalul
11/2/2020 c21 3ChildofWar
Patreon for early releases and patron only discord?
11/1/2020 c16 OmegaRealism
hinata fanboy filth
11/1/2020 c9 OmegaRealism
pathetic over used trash called a banish plot child grow up get some skill and write a real story or spin off involving naruto this and the entire pot is horrendous
11/1/2020 c3 TeraelinII
have literal chills from the ending of this chapter keep it up
10/27/2020 c20 hennessyswagg83
well that great cause the concept was awesome even tho I hate NaruHina stories and this one has many alluding elements of such while somewhat also degrading (in my opinion) two of my top 5 favorite fanfiction pairing kIno and Temari) but it's so masterful written that one can't help but ignore Hinata for the enjoyment of such masterpiece
10/26/2020 c20 5OneSixSeven
At least you're alive.
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