for Draconian Fate Works - Volume 15/13 c18 
9K. M. Donovan
...well then. that is going to give me nightmares for a while.
though you know what might help alleviate said nightmares? the catharsis of seeing this arc wrapped up and done with.
so any updates in the near future would be GREATLY appreciated.
9K. M. Donovan...well then. that is going to give me nightmares for a while.
though you know what might help alleviate said nightmares? the catharsis of seeing this arc wrapped up and done with.
so any updates in the near future would be GREATLY appreciated.
5/13 c15 K. M. Donovan
...what dreams does Shirou have? oh you stupid sadistic freak. you are going to regret that question.
especially once you encounter the Fuyuki Fire. Hell? Hell has nothing on that experience.
...what dreams does Shirou have? oh you stupid sadistic freak. you are going to regret that question.
especially once you encounter the Fuyuki Fire. Hell? Hell has nothing on that experience.
5/10 c6 K. M. Donovan
Harry Blackstone Copperfield Dresden. The Winter Knight. Lord of Demonreach. Pain in the White Councils collective ass. Grandson of the Blackstaff. and many more names and titles yet to be mentioned.
i believe that is the Magus in Chicago name Harry you had Shirou reference?
Harry Blackstone Copperfield Dresden. The Winter Knight. Lord of Demonreach. Pain in the White Councils collective ass. Grandson of the Blackstaff. and many more names and titles yet to be mentioned.
i believe that is the Magus in Chicago name Harry you had Shirou reference?
5/10 c2 K. M. Donovan
honestly? whilei understand purists wanting Shirou to be from only one route? i personally prefer a Shirou who is a blend of all the routes, with a little of the version from Prisma Ilya thrown in for good measure.
that means that like Prisma Shirou, he was trained PROPERLY by Kiritsugu, and was a fully realized Magus when the Grail war occurs. he is also not adverse to using Kiritsugus weapons and tools if the situation calls for it.
it also means that he does not lose his arm, thus does not gain Archers arm.
event wise, Ilya survives, Shirou has his duel with Archer, and later duels Gilgamesh. Heavens feel still happens, meaning shirou and the others have to deal with Zouken and his corrupted grail. only they are able to stop his plans, and save Sakura.
Saber abandons her pursuit of the Grail,but sticks around due to forming a pact with Rin.
soin the end, the Emiya household is Shirou, Ilya, Rider/Medusa. Sakura, Rin and Saber. with Taiga visiting to mooch food.
Shirou is fully trained, has his reality marble, and is no longer on Archer's path. but is instead on the path to become the TRUE Heroic Spirit Emiya. the first modern Hero to earn a place in the Throne of Heroes.
THAT is my preferred version of Shirou.
honestly? whilei understand purists wanting Shirou to be from only one route? i personally prefer a Shirou who is a blend of all the routes, with a little of the version from Prisma Ilya thrown in for good measure.
that means that like Prisma Shirou, he was trained PROPERLY by Kiritsugu, and was a fully realized Magus when the Grail war occurs. he is also not adverse to using Kiritsugus weapons and tools if the situation calls for it.
it also means that he does not lose his arm, thus does not gain Archers arm.
event wise, Ilya survives, Shirou has his duel with Archer, and later duels Gilgamesh. Heavens feel still happens, meaning shirou and the others have to deal with Zouken and his corrupted grail. only they are able to stop his plans, and save Sakura.
Saber abandons her pursuit of the Grail,but sticks around due to forming a pact with Rin.
soin the end, the Emiya household is Shirou, Ilya, Rider/Medusa. Sakura, Rin and Saber. with Taiga visiting to mooch food.
Shirou is fully trained, has his reality marble, and is no longer on Archer's path. but is instead on the path to become the TRUE Heroic Spirit Emiya. the first modern Hero to earn a place in the Throne of Heroes.
THAT is my preferred version of Shirou.
2/19 c2 gigamans57
He's having any sort of trouble with the first antagonist in the series, when he has increased prana from the atmosphere? He should rightly be getting his ass fucking handed to him in like two arcs, but I'm sure he'll be able to do just fine because 'plot'.
Realistically Freed and Raynare should've died in that house before being able to take Asia, if he's as strong as he's implied to be later in the chapter. You even bring up he went up against fucking ORT, which is supposedly on the level of type-esque creatures. If he can do that the enemies in this chapter should've been literally obliterated before being able to blink.
And I can already see you adding more useless antagonists from the Fateverse to this, as if DxD doesn't have enough?.. He's clearly incapable of dealing with them well enough anyways since Asia would have died. I bet you're also going to add prana to the DxD characters, for NO reason, since prana is used in magecraft which is inferior to devil magic 99 times out of a fucking hundred, Shirou is a CLEAR exception to this due to his unique abilities. There is literally nothing magecraft can do that devil magic can't, by definition.
And one final thing is that I can tell from the authors note this will be some smashed together version of the best parts of Shirou and EMIYA/Archer, resulting in some random fucking OC with his name. Their flaws are what make them interesting characters. Was excited for a 400k word crossover but I just know this will follow plot for no fucking reason when your OC should be curbstomping every antagonist up to Rizevim...
He's having any sort of trouble with the first antagonist in the series, when he has increased prana from the atmosphere? He should rightly be getting his ass fucking handed to him in like two arcs, but I'm sure he'll be able to do just fine because 'plot'.
Realistically Freed and Raynare should've died in that house before being able to take Asia, if he's as strong as he's implied to be later in the chapter. You even bring up he went up against fucking ORT, which is supposedly on the level of type-esque creatures. If he can do that the enemies in this chapter should've been literally obliterated before being able to blink.
And I can already see you adding more useless antagonists from the Fateverse to this, as if DxD doesn't have enough?.. He's clearly incapable of dealing with them well enough anyways since Asia would have died. I bet you're also going to add prana to the DxD characters, for NO reason, since prana is used in magecraft which is inferior to devil magic 99 times out of a fucking hundred, Shirou is a CLEAR exception to this due to his unique abilities. There is literally nothing magecraft can do that devil magic can't, by definition.
And one final thing is that I can tell from the authors note this will be some smashed together version of the best parts of Shirou and EMIYA/Archer, resulting in some random fucking OC with his name. Their flaws are what make them interesting characters. Was excited for a 400k word crossover but I just know this will follow plot for no fucking reason when your OC should be curbstomping every antagonist up to Rizevim...
2/4 c8 yesyesyes1212
portals? shirou is shit at other mysteries other than his big 3. Also why does he keep calling out the root when cursing? How old was he when he was in the first world that the sight of panties made him blush? Whats with characters occasionally see someone else standing beside him then proceed to ignore about that sight completely?
portals? shirou is shit at other mysteries other than his big 3. Also why does he keep calling out the root when cursing? How old was he when he was in the first world that the sight of panties made him blush? Whats with characters occasionally see someone else standing beside him then proceed to ignore about that sight completely?
2/4 c7 yesyesyes1212
Now why did those sacred gears react to shirou? His UBW doesnt contain conscience weapons either, thats a big cap, he creates a blue print of weapons he 'understand' and store it in his soul, im pretty sure divine construct is way over his head literally
Now why did those sacred gears react to shirou? His UBW doesnt contain conscience weapons either, thats a big cap, he creates a blue print of weapons he 'understand' and store it in his soul, im pretty sure divine construct is way over his head literally
2/4 c6 yesyesyes1212
Will shirou get a power up? What happened to that magic crest way back to chapter 1?
Will shirou get a power up? What happened to that magic crest way back to chapter 1?
2/3 c5 yesyesyes1212
Why didnt the shards from shirou's projection disappear immediately after being broken? Shirou has a connection to his projection because hes supplying them with prana to keep them around, you could say he doesnt need to because dxd but he should have a connection to them
Why didnt the shards from shirou's projection disappear immediately after being broken? Shirou has a connection to his projection because hes supplying them with prana to keep them around, you could say he doesnt need to because dxd but he should have a connection to them
2/3 c4 yesyesyes1212
Since when can the people at the associate travel through dimensions? Is there a restriction? Cause this is in the realm of second magic
Since when can the people at the associate travel through dimensions? Is there a restriction? Cause this is in the realm of second magic
2/3 c3 yesyesyes1212
Buh, who were those guys down bellow? I thought only second magic users and holy grails can send people to other worlds, and why do they want to kill shirou?
Buh, who were those guys down bellow? I thought only second magic users and holy grails can send people to other worlds, and why do they want to kill shirou?
1/11 c1 mkevyn807
I don't know if it's too late for a little criticism on chapter 1 but there is a certain part that doesn't make much sense, it's about the fact that there could be someone in DXD who can match ORT
I don't know if it's too late for a little criticism on chapter 1 but there is a certain part that doesn't make much sense, it's about the fact that there could be someone in DXD who can match ORT
11/26/2024 c1 Dananator
Did you really say that Great Red of all things is compatible to ORT? That’s laughable… all of DxD is curbstomped by any Type
Did you really say that Great Red of all things is compatible to ORT? That’s laughable… all of DxD is curbstomped by any Type
11/21/2024 c7 Guest
man I was hoping to see unlimited blade works
man I was hoping to see unlimited blade works