
8/26/2024 c18 denzelcasanova8
I can only say...this is a masterpiece, something that only few will recognize such art, this story, its words are all ART, I hope there are new chapters of this beautiful story.
I can only say...this is a masterpiece, something that only few will recognize such art, this story, its words are all ART, I hope there are new chapters of this beautiful story.
8/12/2024 c2 Guest
he is so fucking weak hahahahahaha
he is so fucking weak hahahahahaha
7/19/2024 c1
9K. M. Donovan
we call those Plot Bunnies. tiny little story ideas that spawn into your head, will not leave, ad breed like rabbits.
we know them, we love them, and we hate them

we call those Plot Bunnies. tiny little story ideas that spawn into your head, will not leave, ad breed like rabbits.
we know them, we love them, and we hate them
6/28/2024 c3 Guest
He is an idiot and so is literally everyone in that room. That doesn't make him sound cool he's an arrogant idiot does he have access to those powerful barriers or powerful artifacts now? No then it doesn't matter at all. This is like having Gilgamesh beat Artoria to near death then the master finishing her off and then declaring it the masters victory alone your ignoring a huge part of the situation.
He is an idiot and so is literally everyone in that room. That doesn't make him sound cool he's an arrogant idiot does he have access to those powerful barriers or powerful artifacts now? No then it doesn't matter at all. This is like having Gilgamesh beat Artoria to near death then the master finishing her off and then declaring it the masters victory alone your ignoring a huge part of the situation.
6/6/2024 c13 Guest
Wasted noticr
Wasted noticr
6/6/2024 c11 Guest
Wasted chapter
Wasted chapter
6/6/2024 c3 Guest
Part 4
*Knight not Kinght
Part 4
*Knight not Kinght
5/26/2024 c4 Gilgamesh50
Okay im not gonna lie the part of him is missing yhing comes out of nowhere fro grayfia
Okay im not gonna lie the part of him is missing yhing comes out of nowhere fro grayfia
5/7/2024 c18
2R.R. Blaze
Good chapter.
Ever thought of making a 'Children from the Future' fanfic based on Fate/Grand Order? Many would be interested in that.

Good chapter.
Ever thought of making a 'Children from the Future' fanfic based on Fate/Grand Order? Many would be interested in that.
4/16/2024 c18 vietthai96
While i love that you come back, there are so many unnecessary filler chapters here, that make the story stagnated. The verse itself have too many characters already in canon, and you just adding even more unnecessary characters into the mix. It would be better if you just progress the actual story rather than keep adding filler
While i love that you come back, there are so many unnecessary filler chapters here, that make the story stagnated. The verse itself have too many characters already in canon, and you just adding even more unnecessary characters into the mix. It would be better if you just progress the actual story rather than keep adding filler
3/9/2024 c2 Aedwards179
thrres 10 paragraphs in this vhapter just describing girls. now short ones either. hundreds if not thousands of words just telling you what girls look like. its ridiculous.
thrres 10 paragraphs in this vhapter just describing girls. now short ones either. hundreds if not thousands of words just telling you what girls look like. its ridiculous.
3/9/2024 c2 Aedwards179
I'm barely into this and I can already tell its going to be a painful read. with it in first person and with so kuch useless and repeating information? its long winded as fuck, it's not even world building or useful information its just a bunch of long winded bullshit you'd hear from an old man happy to have someone listen to him.
I'm barely into this and I can already tell its going to be a painful read. with it in first person and with so kuch useless and repeating information? its long winded as fuck, it's not even world building or useful information its just a bunch of long winded bullshit you'd hear from an old man happy to have someone listen to him.
3/3/2024 c18 xXwolfsterXx644
Great chapter dude been a long while since the last update definitely Can't wait for the next update and see them finally take down the dude and hopefully see more chapters in the future
Great chapter dude been a long while since the last update definitely Can't wait for the next update and see them finally take down the dude and hopefully see more chapters in the future