
7/23/2015 c6 Mysterious Anon
Yikes! I can't believe you were planning to turn it into a tragedy. And I really don't like tragedies and avoid them like plague, not because they're bad but it makes me sad and depressed... Well, I understand your decision and have to say you're very a good writer. Will miss your writing.
Yikes! I can't believe you were planning to turn it into a tragedy. And I really don't like tragedies and avoid them like plague, not because they're bad but it makes me sad and depressed... Well, I understand your decision and have to say you're very a good writer. Will miss your writing.
7/8/2015 c5
1Mew57
Haha, I agree with you! Glad you did that with yamcha. Poor guy is always killed off in too many fabrics. And wait to meet Goku here!

Haha, I agree with you! Glad you did that with yamcha. Poor guy is always killed off in too many fabrics. And wait to meet Goku here!
6/30/2015 c5 Chichi
Thanks for updating this very quickly. Your story is awesome. So e xcited for the next chapter. Appreciate you :)
Thanks for updating this very quickly. Your story is awesome. So e xcited for the next chapter. Appreciate you :)
6/30/2015 c5 isha
Oh i loved it and i thought yamcha was actually a noble man by helping chichi so much but he had other plans hmmm so he liked chichi and i can't wait for goku to finally meet chichi and i hope goku will be a bit mature type but if he is his usual childlike self than thats okay too and pllzzz update soon i m looking forward to it and thanks for the update
Oh i loved it and i thought yamcha was actually a noble man by helping chichi so much but he had other plans hmmm so he liked chichi and i can't wait for goku to finally meet chichi and i hope goku will be a bit mature type but if he is his usual childlike self than thats okay too and pllzzz update soon i m looking forward to it and thanks for the update
6/30/2015 c5 isha
YAAAAAYYYY an update woohooooo
YAAAAAYYYY an update woohooooo
6/29/2015 c5 Guests
Yas! Haha 'where she meets the monkey god and other bad things happen' that made me lol. I'm so excited though for the next chapter! Update fast please!
Yas! Haha 'where she meets the monkey god and other bad things happen' that made me lol. I'm so excited though for the next chapter! Update fast please!
6/29/2015 c5 super saiyan
Goku: So, Chichi needs help taking down some demon, huh? Sounds fun! Can I take a crack at it? It'd be awesome
to see if I can beat 'em. Still, this guy took what she cares about from her. I will never forgive him for that.
Goku: So, Chichi needs help taking down some demon, huh? Sounds fun! Can I take a crack at it? It'd be awesome
to see if I can beat 'em. Still, this guy took what she cares about from her. I will never forgive him for that.
6/30/2015 c5
11Starfire Grace
I like that you didn't make Yamcha too noble he's died plenty of times in the series no need to die again LOLz anyways it was a good chapter and can't wait for the next one ans Yay! Goku coming! :D

I like that you didn't make Yamcha too noble he's died plenty of times in the series no need to die again LOLz anyways it was a good chapter and can't wait for the next one ans Yay! Goku coming! :D
6/30/2015 c5
10Saiyan Kween
I am loving this plot! I want to see where this is going :') I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am loving this plot! I want to see where this is going :') I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/29/2015 c5 foxsqueen
Ya updatr so soon! Oh happy day!
poor Yamcha his love was so unreachable, damn that crazy ass demon prince is destroying everything!
I can't wait to read about goku and chichi interaction, wooho!~
keep awesome! xx
Ya updatr so soon! Oh happy day!
poor Yamcha his love was so unreachable, damn that crazy ass demon prince is destroying everything!
I can't wait to read about goku and chichi interaction, wooho!~
keep awesome! xx
6/29/2015 c4 Chichi
This story is really exciting however, it's verys short. Please update quickly :)
This story is really exciting however, it's verys short. Please update quickly :)