1/19 c30 mattias.akerlund.71
lol loved the fight, looking forward to the reactions once the others learn of it... xD
lol loved the fight, looking forward to the reactions once the others learn of it... xD
1/13 c30 Guest
Please update soon
Please update soon
1/11 c14 generalwd40
Thank you for the story, I like it very much !
I also like the subtle Old West (Western/Saloon) refefence when Naruto said to Hiruzen that is tough when the guy with the ninjato have attack Naruto before, and Hiruzen answer that this guy drown his sins in cheap Rotgut !
Thank you for the story, I like it very much !
I also like the subtle Old West (Western/Saloon) refefence when Naruto said to Hiruzen that is tough when the guy with the ninjato have attack Naruto before, and Hiruzen answer that this guy drown his sins in cheap Rotgut !
1/8 c30 3kenzie.parish
Ok I love this story but please. Please. PLEASE. Do not reduce my favorite sharkman to a dumb brute. Hes smart, (using words like Ovivivaporous in casual conversation with someone he JUST met) he is Polite and extremely well mannered (in Japanese he uses a dialect called Keigo, which is Extremely polite and Formal, the dub makes him sound like a fucking meathead) and I can link at least 2 posts talking about him as a nuanced character. So I am begging you. Do not disrespect Hoshigaki Kisame by making him a dumb brute. He is a well mannered and educated brute, thank you very much. Lol.
Anyway, rant over. Love the fic so much, absolutely fantastic so far, hope to see more in the new year!
Ok I love this story but please. Please. PLEASE. Do not reduce my favorite sharkman to a dumb brute. Hes smart, (using words like Ovivivaporous in casual conversation with someone he JUST met) he is Polite and extremely well mannered (in Japanese he uses a dialect called Keigo, which is Extremely polite and Formal, the dub makes him sound like a fucking meathead) and I can link at least 2 posts talking about him as a nuanced character. So I am begging you. Do not disrespect Hoshigaki Kisame by making him a dumb brute. He is a well mannered and educated brute, thank you very much. Lol.
Anyway, rant over. Love the fic so much, absolutely fantastic so far, hope to see more in the new year!
1/3 c30 14daniphantomforlife
Noooo it was just getting good! XD Good job with the story so far, I loved it so much
Noooo it was just getting good! XD Good job with the story so far, I loved it so much
1/1 c30 Introverted Anime Lover
I’m a big fan of this fic, but I feel like Naruto is getting too strong too quickly. Everything else is phenomenal. I love the character interactions, I love the gamer structure, I love the plots you’re setting up. And I sincerely hope you continue to update this; however, Genin Naruto killing a Jonin is just insane. I get that this guy’s skills had atrophied, o get that he was wielding an objectively flawed weapon, I get that he was prematurely driven from the Mist. But he’s still a Jonin, cream of the crop. He should’ve been able to blitz Naruto from the start. If this guy was a special Jonin and Naruto was able to defeat him by the skin on his teeth, then I could let it fly. But Naruto didn’t even take a hit. How is Naruto gonna get beaten up by Lee and then soundly defeat a Jonin. It just doesn’t make sense. I love what you’re doing, but I strongly suggest that you revise this chapter to make the fight more realistic. I get that Naruto was pulling crazy tactics, but in reality there’s just no way he can take on a Jonin level ninja, especially with this level of ease. That being said, I love your fic and wish you the best. I hope to see more!
I’m a big fan of this fic, but I feel like Naruto is getting too strong too quickly. Everything else is phenomenal. I love the character interactions, I love the gamer structure, I love the plots you’re setting up. And I sincerely hope you continue to update this; however, Genin Naruto killing a Jonin is just insane. I get that this guy’s skills had atrophied, o get that he was wielding an objectively flawed weapon, I get that he was prematurely driven from the Mist. But he’s still a Jonin, cream of the crop. He should’ve been able to blitz Naruto from the start. If this guy was a special Jonin and Naruto was able to defeat him by the skin on his teeth, then I could let it fly. But Naruto didn’t even take a hit. How is Naruto gonna get beaten up by Lee and then soundly defeat a Jonin. It just doesn’t make sense. I love what you’re doing, but I strongly suggest that you revise this chapter to make the fight more realistic. I get that Naruto was pulling crazy tactics, but in reality there’s just no way he can take on a Jonin level ninja, especially with this level of ease. That being said, I love your fic and wish you the best. I hope to see more!
12/22/2024 c30 wolflegion2015
more please. the cliffhanger and the title for the next chapter is killing me with anticipation.
more please. the cliffhanger and the title for the next chapter is killing me with anticipation.
12/17/2024 c20 iremjohn00
Fucker god damn it that is such a stupid pun i hate to lvoe it god damn it you cheeky shit argh
Fucker god damn it that is such a stupid pun i hate to lvoe it god damn it you cheeky shit argh
11/18/2024 c18 Sminly04
It would be nice to see Naruto bring in a lower end bounty alive and then later get helped by them.
It would be nice to see Naruto bring in a lower end bounty alive and then later get helped by them.
11/16/2024 c19 Guest
RE: I thought Jinchuriki were immune to Genjutsu due to their constant fluctuating chakra?
That's only when Jinchuriki and Bijuu are co-operating; while the Jinchuriki is fighting their opponent, their Bijuu can deliberately fluctuate their Chakra (or use "Genjutsu: Kai") to dispel/disrupt any attempts to use Genjutsu on the Jinchuriki.
RE: I thought Jinchuriki were immune to Genjutsu due to their constant fluctuating chakra?
That's only when Jinchuriki and Bijuu are co-operating; while the Jinchuriki is fighting their opponent, their Bijuu can deliberately fluctuate their Chakra (or use "Genjutsu: Kai") to dispel/disrupt any attempts to use Genjutsu on the Jinchuriki.
11/16/2024 c19 InfiniteShadow3
I thought Jinchuriki were immune to Genjutsu due to their constant fluctuating chakra?
I thought Jinchuriki were immune to Genjutsu due to their constant fluctuating chakra?
11/14/2024 c21 Guest
Who Knows, maybe, one-day, Fūinjutsu Master Naruto will invent a Seal to place on himself to interfere with any attempt to use Genjutsu on him (at-least for low-level Genjutsu)...?
Your Thoughts?
Who Knows, maybe, one-day, Fūinjutsu Master Naruto will invent a Seal to place on himself to interfere with any attempt to use Genjutsu on him (at-least for low-level Genjutsu)...?
Your Thoughts?