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10/17/2015 c7 4Motivation is Dying
What kind of a Japanese couple names their kids like that? It's not even Japanese nor French. Anyway, the story is fair enough for my standards.
4/2/2015 c7 JuliaNightmare
Beautiful ending
3/12/2015 c2 flylie
I can see that our public schools have failed you. That is, if you live in the United States.
My child, you need grammar.
2/2/2015 c3 Guest
I think you should do a scary movie for the father daughter night thing and then have haruhi dream about what happend with thoses perverts. Then she gets to school and after all of the classes are over she goes to the fountain and forgets all about what kyoya had told her and then tamaki walks by and sees her crying. You add the details if you want to use this.
1/30/2015 c3 Snowchild32
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!
1/30/2015 c2 Snowchild32
Great chapter!
1/30/2015 c1 Snowchild32
Loved it!
1/26/2015 c2 s.f
its TAMAKI not Tamiki... and haruhis dads okama (crossdresser) name is RANKA. you should use more words with same meaning insted of same word all the time. exm. haruhis dad father, ranka,otosan, chichiue, papa... it makes the writing more colorful insted off repetitive.

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