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1/18/2015 c3 Natsumo
yummy pineapple smoothies seem so legit XD

Is it me I'm smelling yaoi? or it just me?
1/18/2015 c2 Kei
Ow . I didn't had time to review chap 1 and chap 2 is already out.
Well I'm not fond of stories with OC's as main characters but still, this looks quite interesting. You really should continue!
But anyway, how does he manage to get hit so much by the bazooka oO? Or is it something that looks like it, works like it, but isn't it? ...Nah... Thinking to much. Oh well, I will see
Haha the chopsticks really made me laugh! Now I won't be ever able to look at my chopsticks normaly (and I use them quite often x)
1/18/2015 c2 37Kuroi Rin
Hahaha xD okay this is seriously funny!
I mean, chopsticks? :D
Well, if he is able to fight later on with them and have a name for himself to harm others really bad... well, why not!
But to be hit this much with the Bazooka, now it is like with Shoichi, but Shoichi got hit on purpose and he now not and doesn't seem to have a plan what's going on
Hehehe and the writing style in this story is interesting as well, it is something different so yeah!
I'm looking forward for more! :3
1/17/2015 c2 Natsumo
I love your oc his funny xD
1/16/2015 c1 2croixisdaddy
Oh, definitely. you have to continue! Why the hell doesnt this have more reviews? You're one of my favorites' author and im sure you'll make this into a magnificent fic x3 The OC you created seems to be interesting as well, the fact that he doesnt know japanese makes it realistic and im curious about him and Tsuna. Please continue!
1/16/2015 c1 37Kuroi Rin
Hmmm I think you have my attention now :)
For normal I'm not a big OC fan but if it chatshes my interest, sure why not :3
Well, wonder what will come next :)
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