for The Story of Gohan2/11/2021 c4 Guest
This is probably the worst chapter I have ever seen
This is probably the worst chapter I have ever seen
11/7/2018 c6 Ichigo
I'm not putting in my oc's family name, it'd be too obvious. I loved the TFS reference. If you can, could you please update soon? This is an awesome story. DFTBA (Don't forget to be awesome)!
I'm not putting in my oc's family name, it'd be too obvious. I loved the TFS reference. If you can, could you please update soon? This is an awesome story. DFTBA (Don't forget to be awesome)!
7/15/2016 c5 
4Nekoinuhanyou
Aw I wanted a longer chapter of Gohan as an oozaru. I suck at writing but would love to see more fanfics of Gohan and Videl when he becomes an oozaru.
4NekoinuhanyouAw I wanted a longer chapter of Gohan as an oozaru. I suck at writing but would love to see more fanfics of Gohan and Videl when he becomes an oozaru.
1/20/2016 c4 shijiro
ok this chapter makes me want to drop this story. first mysteries of gohan. that means videl, erasa, and sharpner want to investigate him. yet by chapter three there have been no big mysterious things to question about gohan, no actual snooping done by the three, yet suddenly videl is stuck in the bathroom with gohan and he just says what the hell let me tell u my life story. there is no mystery anywhere. this jus seems like a lazy copout. and in this chapter videls condition makes no sense where in the hell did she get the idea he could fly and could teach her nothing of his powers were revealed to even make videl suspect him as a trickster but out of nowhere "teach me how to fly" "ok". like what the hell is that if ur just comin up with random stuff asu go u should rethink ur story so the whole title actually fits the story or renane ur story to gohan revealed in the bathroom because hes an idiot. also no one can break katchin super saiyan or not. it even broke the z sword which took gohan a while jus to handle
ok this chapter makes me want to drop this story. first mysteries of gohan. that means videl, erasa, and sharpner want to investigate him. yet by chapter three there have been no big mysterious things to question about gohan, no actual snooping done by the three, yet suddenly videl is stuck in the bathroom with gohan and he just says what the hell let me tell u my life story. there is no mystery anywhere. this jus seems like a lazy copout. and in this chapter videls condition makes no sense where in the hell did she get the idea he could fly and could teach her nothing of his powers were revealed to even make videl suspect him as a trickster but out of nowhere "teach me how to fly" "ok". like what the hell is that if ur just comin up with random stuff asu go u should rethink ur story so the whole title actually fits the story or renane ur story to gohan revealed in the bathroom because hes an idiot. also no one can break katchin super saiyan or not. it even broke the z sword which took gohan a while jus to handle
11/27/2015 c6 Dragon
This is awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter
This is awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter
6/10/2015 c4 3Dyton
I'll be honest, this wasn't much of a Mystery of Gohan, as the title put it. It's kind of hard to call it that when Gohan freely is telling them his secrets, and is making no attempt to even hide any. One of the cliche elements was used in the form of the bathroom scene, and I call it cliche because I have seen numerous amounts of people using it... and the tail...sigh...okay.
I mentioned in the first chapter that I felt the story was going abnormally fast, but after reading the four chapter, it was nothing compare to the rest. You need to slow down, and try to avoid some of the most over used cliches.
3DytonI'll be honest, this wasn't much of a Mystery of Gohan, as the title put it. It's kind of hard to call it that when Gohan freely is telling them his secrets, and is making no attempt to even hide any. One of the cliche elements was used in the form of the bathroom scene, and I call it cliche because I have seen numerous amounts of people using it... and the tail...sigh...okay.
I mentioned in the first chapter that I felt the story was going abnormally fast, but after reading the four chapter, it was nothing compare to the rest. You need to slow down, and try to avoid some of the most over used cliches.
6/10/2015 c1 Dyton
Well at least you admitted that this story takes many cues from it's predecessors. However, I feel that the story is going way to fast for my taste, but maybe in the next few chapter things will change.
Well at least you admitted that this story takes many cues from it's predecessors. However, I feel that the story is going way to fast for my taste, but maybe in the next few chapter things will change.
4/11/2015 c4 Guest
great chapter
update soon
great chapter
update soon
4/11/2015 c4 dragon
I just love it. please continue.
I just love it. please continue.