
22h c95 alexa78
This is one of those stories that pulls you in right away whether it’s the characters the vibe, or the ideas behind it. It’s fun, it’s thoughtful, and it really sticks with you. No matter what you’re into, there’s something here that’ll catch your eye.
This is one of those stories that pulls you in right away whether it’s the characters the vibe, or the ideas behind it. It’s fun, it’s thoughtful, and it really sticks with you. No matter what you’re into, there’s something here that’ll catch your eye.
6/24/2020 c17
6GabriellaGadfly
FUCK YEAH
I LOVE HOW ED'S REGAINING HIS INDEPENDENCE
Also, congrats
I was uneasy about it at first, but after the note that it's not gonna go further and after everything he's been doing to try and help Ed become more independent, you've managed to make me warm up to/like this story's Roy!
*god, I wanna hug Ed so badly*

FUCK YEAH
I LOVE HOW ED'S REGAINING HIS INDEPENDENCE
Also, congrats
I was uneasy about it at first, but after the note that it's not gonna go further and after everything he's been doing to try and help Ed become more independent, you've managed to make me warm up to/like this story's Roy!
*god, I wanna hug Ed so badly*
6/24/2020 c11 GabriellaGadfly
aaaaa
I'm literally crying right now
congrats, you monster
XD
Though what I'm confused about is why they're not trying to communicate with him
Didn't they already establish yes and no?
aaaaa
I'm literally crying right now
congrats, you monster
XD
Though what I'm confused about is why they're not trying to communicate with him
Didn't they already establish yes and no?
6/24/2020 c8 GabriellaGadfly
aaaa, god, this is so sad and tragic
I feel for Ed so much
You really crushed my heart into pieces with that ending, didn't you?
And the worst part is that it's absolutely true
aaaa, god, this is so sad and tragic
I feel for Ed so much
You really crushed my heart into pieces with that ending, didn't you?
And the worst part is that it's absolutely true
6/24/2020 c7 GabriellaGadfly
AAAAA
THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY
I LOVE THE CONCEPT OF ED HAVING TO GIVE UP HIS SENSES AND HOW YOU DESCRIBE HIS LIMITED VIEW OF THE WORLD
but god, i hate Roy so much here
like? if those actually *were* kisses earlier, he's trying to initiate a romantic relationship with someone who's pretty much completely dependent on him, can't get away if he wanted to, and who has to rely on him for pretty much everything
Initiating a romantic relationship when there's *that big* of a power imbalance is just wrong
BUT SERIOUSLY
AMAZING STORY
AND KUDOS TO YOU FOR EVERYTHING
God, I feel so bad for Al
Hopefully Ed'll be able to communicate better soon and actually get to know for certain if he's alive or not, if the transmutation succeeded
Because that uncertainty has to be *killing him*
LOOKING FOWARDS TO MORE!
AAAAA
THIS IS SUCH A GREAT STORY
I LOVE THE CONCEPT OF ED HAVING TO GIVE UP HIS SENSES AND HOW YOU DESCRIBE HIS LIMITED VIEW OF THE WORLD
but god, i hate Roy so much here
like? if those actually *were* kisses earlier, he's trying to initiate a romantic relationship with someone who's pretty much completely dependent on him, can't get away if he wanted to, and who has to rely on him for pretty much everything
Initiating a romantic relationship when there's *that big* of a power imbalance is just wrong
BUT SERIOUSLY
AMAZING STORY
AND KUDOS TO YOU FOR EVERYTHING
God, I feel so bad for Al
Hopefully Ed'll be able to communicate better soon and actually get to know for certain if he's alive or not, if the transmutation succeeded
Because that uncertainty has to be *killing him*
LOOKING FOWARDS TO MORE!
6/20/2020 c95
15Solomon's Savior
Welp I just finished my 3rd or 4th re-read and I always forget the story's incomplete. Its just so good. i hope lifes going well for you. At least you didnt leave off on a cliffhanger.

Welp I just finished my 3rd or 4th re-read and I always forget the story's incomplete. Its just so good. i hope lifes going well for you. At least you didnt leave off on a cliffhanger.
11/4/2019 c95 anon
Man I MISS this storyy terribly tbh... Wanted to see how it would end
Man I MISS this storyy terribly tbh... Wanted to see how it would end
11/1/2019 c82 Azun26
Can we get more obvious smut? Do we get more obvious smut? Did we get it? Ur really good with details and descriptions so it'd be really awesome to read the smut that would occur with their available senses.
Can we get more obvious smut? Do we get more obvious smut? Did we get it? Ur really good with details and descriptions so it'd be really awesome to read the smut that would occur with their available senses.
10/26/2019 c39 Azun26
Major Armstrong is DEFINITELY a source to fear. Honestly, I know he means well, but he scared me throughout the whole series
Major Armstrong is DEFINITELY a source to fear. Honestly, I know he means well, but he scared me throughout the whole series