for A Sense of Reality1/20/2015 c8 Guest
Umm... What exactly did Roy do to him?
And it's great to have that confirmation, 'cause sometimes authors'll throw you for a loop :D
Umm... What exactly did Roy do to him?
And it's great to have that confirmation, 'cause sometimes authors'll throw you for a loop :D
1/20/2015 c8 
2Secret Companion
I hope that there's some way for him to get his senses back I really do...this story is fantastic the writing is perfect and everything is perfectly fit together
2Secret CompanionI hope that there's some way for him to get his senses back I really do...this story is fantastic the writing is perfect and everything is perfectly fit together
1/19/2015 c7 34The QAS
Your descriptive language is truly captivating and if for nothing else, I will continue to read this story for your word use.
Realize that I have nothing against slash pairings. I'm just not a big romance person in general.
You've also done a really good job in keeping Ed's condition consistent.
34The QASYour descriptive language is truly captivating and if for nothing else, I will continue to read this story for your word use.
Realize that I have nothing against slash pairings. I'm just not a big romance person in general.
You've also done a really good job in keeping Ed's condition consistent.
1/19/2015 c5 The QAS
Interesting. I'm not usually into the RoyEd pairing, but I suppose it could hypothetically work under the circumstances. The thought behind the story honestly interests me more than the actual plot in this case.
To me, though, it looks more like Mustang is Ed's lifeline than anything.
Interesting. I'm not usually into the RoyEd pairing, but I suppose it could hypothetically work under the circumstances. The thought behind the story honestly interests me more than the actual plot in this case.
To me, though, it looks more like Mustang is Ed's lifeline than anything.
1/18/2015 c6 Ta8Yuyu
Wow! What an interesting and unusual fanfic! Dear author, you are very talented, please continue!
Wow! What an interesting and unusual fanfic! Dear author, you are very talented, please continue!
1/18/2015 c5 Brenne
C'mon Al! Don't give up on your brother like that! Isn't he still gonna try and get Ed back to normal? Has he really given up on his brother? Oh! The suspense! I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD
C'mon Al! Don't give up on your brother like that! Isn't he still gonna try and get Ed back to normal? Has he really given up on his brother? Oh! The suspense! I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD
1/18/2015 c1 3jejuneha
I knew this was going to hurt me emotionally why did I click on this wonderfully written but painful fanfic :)
3jejunehaI knew this was going to hurt me emotionally why did I click on this wonderfully written but painful fanfic :)
1/18/2015 c4 Brenne
I hope Al is able to somehow get Ed's senses back! The thought of Ed being trapped in this prison forever is just horrible! I find it kinda cute when Ed got excited like a young child when Roy helped him stand and communicated with him. I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD
I hope Al is able to somehow get Ed's senses back! The thought of Ed being trapped in this prison forever is just horrible! I find it kinda cute when Ed got excited like a young child when Roy helped him stand and communicated with him. I wonder what happens next. Looking forward to more! XD
1/18/2015 c4 34The QAS
Another awesome chapter. It's interesting that while Ed has lost the traditional five senses he retains things like his sense of temperature and proprioception (knowing where his limbs are).
34The QASAnother awesome chapter. It's interesting that while Ed has lost the traditional five senses he retains things like his sense of temperature and proprioception (knowing where his limbs are).