for My Effect: Convergence4/22 c22 Makarainen
Do you have any idea how difficult it is to fall out of a medical bed or cot from resting on your back even without being a meatsack of a weakened, freshly stitched-together patient? Dude was just looking at his wrist watch, not doing his toenails. Slapstick is funny, yes, but this is not a character from a Roadrunner cartoon skit. Try to keep it at least somewhat realistic within the story universe's laws of physics, will you?
Do you have any idea how difficult it is to fall out of a medical bed or cot from resting on your back even without being a meatsack of a weakened, freshly stitched-together patient? Dude was just looking at his wrist watch, not doing his toenails. Slapstick is funny, yes, but this is not a character from a Roadrunner cartoon skit. Try to keep it at least somewhat realistic within the story universe's laws of physics, will you?
12/28/2024 c59 
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmith
this story is absolutely amazing and had me hooked the whole time.
im not sure if its still being updated. but ill be ready for next ch if it is!
thanks for the great read so far
2Walkmanapprenticewordsmiththis story is absolutely amazing and had me hooked the whole time.
im not sure if its still being updated. but ill be ready for next ch if it is!
thanks for the great read so far
12/27/2024 c45 Makarainen
Okay, so, who or what, pray tell, in the everloving fuck is "Thadea"? Because try as I might, short of prostituting my dignity to EA's mandatory third-party account to actually play ME3, or hunting down any obscure non-game resources, I can't find even a whisper on the wind in terms of references to Vasir. Yet you made it, or failed to not make it, sound like this bit was a reference to something at least anxillarily canon enough to be knowable by someone familiar enough with the ME universe. Which means two things: Either it is, and you happily butchered whatever you _meant_ to spell to the point of it becoming unsearchable, or it isn't and your story is lacking vital exposition to communicate that the event in question truly is nothing more than a Noodle Incident trope. Either way: EXPLAIN THIS BULLSHIT!
Okay, so, who or what, pray tell, in the everloving fuck is "Thadea"? Because try as I might, short of prostituting my dignity to EA's mandatory third-party account to actually play ME3, or hunting down any obscure non-game resources, I can't find even a whisper on the wind in terms of references to Vasir. Yet you made it, or failed to not make it, sound like this bit was a reference to something at least anxillarily canon enough to be knowable by someone familiar enough with the ME universe. Which means two things: Either it is, and you happily butchered whatever you _meant_ to spell to the point of it becoming unsearchable, or it isn't and your story is lacking vital exposition to communicate that the event in question truly is nothing more than a Noodle Incident trope. Either way: EXPLAIN THIS BULLSHIT!
10/25/2024 c59 Kiwi
Please come back
Please come back
10/23/2024 c1 Lot1t
Yeah, the author showed the Internet that he is an imbecile, although now this is a trend.
Yeah, the author showed the Internet that he is an imbecile, although now this is a trend.
8/20/2024 c59 uiuonn
Caught up, really great story. swear it only said 52 chapters when started reading but says it was last updated in 2023, weird.
Caught up, really great story. swear it only said 52 chapters when started reading but says it was last updated in 2023, weird.
8/20/2024 c54 uiuonn
imo would've been more interesting if he was catatonic for a while on SR2, more dramatic and emotional.
imo would've been more interesting if he was catatonic for a while on SR2, more dramatic and emotional.
4/12/2024 c5 dreadix
i'm serious just wth. the mc has a mouth as big as a baseball field with the amount of meta knowledge he spews. once or twice i would understand but he is constantly messing up lol. next he'll say that they gotta save tali from sarens agent or some crap.
i'm serious just wth. the mc has a mouth as big as a baseball field with the amount of meta knowledge he spews. once or twice i would understand but he is constantly messing up lol. next he'll say that they gotta save tali from sarens agent or some crap.
4/12/2024 c2 dreadix
he literally would be stupid to lie when has been caught many times saying things he shouldnt know. so unless the glowy person can rewind time its going to be hard to explain away alot.
he literally would be stupid to lie when has been caught many times saying things he shouldnt know. so unless the glowy person can rewind time its going to be hard to explain away alot.
4/9/2024 c31 MiniHerc
what the hell is the point of writing an SI if you just rehash canon? another garbage ass story. i'm done
what the hell is the point of writing an SI if you just rehash canon? another garbage ass story. i'm done
4/9/2024 c10 MiniHerc
"Okay, this chapter took a really weird turn, and I'm not sure who to blame." yourself, of course
"Okay, this chapter took a really weird turn, and I'm not sure who to blame." yourself, of course