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6/13/2018 c1 Guest
WTF is the title spelled with untie and not unite
9/18/2017 c1 Guest
replace rex with max steel
3/8/2015 c1 Guest
You really need to improve this. I mean, if you don't even have the decency to check for spelling mistakes in the damn title of the fic, a wakeup call is needed.
1/19/2015 c1 troll 10
Split the chapter instead of a giant wall of text, get a beta ,lose the oc. there is no need for a broken oc acting as ben's brother(gary stu) with the same power as him who took credit for everything he's done. the way i see it the oc is just a pathetic excuse for making your yaoi fantasies into fanfiction.
1/18/2015 c1 24Rexfan1333
All the sentences are a little hard to read, try to space things out a bit and don't make this a Yaoi story, I'm sorry, I know you like it and I won't judge you or anything, but that stuff is just disturbing for making two straight male characters gay and it's way too popular, I don't mind adding female love interest in this (Kai and Sam or crossover pairs are great too), but please no Yaoi.

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