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1/19/2015 c1 lemony.club
Hmmm... Naruto as an Exceed? Could be interesting :). There some weird line spacing that you should fix, and I do get ticked off when people don't capitalize names. natsu should be Natsu. happy should be Happy. If it's not capitalize, I read it as a word, not a name.

Example:
"I'm happy." vs "I'm Happy." - the second is introducing himself. Sees the different it makes?
"I'm Lucy." vs "I'm lucy." - did you misspell lucky in the second case? :)

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