
2/20/2015 c34
3Caelys
The dark cloud is Darkrai ! I'm sure of that ! The end of this party it was funny then epic.
And for the vote... I think you should continued Grovyle's story by putting the POV of Connor and Vulcan. A bit like usual, when you alternate the POVs.

The dark cloud is Darkrai ! I'm sure of that ! The end of this party it was funny then epic.
And for the vote... I think you should continued Grovyle's story by putting the POV of Connor and Vulcan. A bit like usual, when you alternate the POVs.
2/19/2015 c33 swiftattackdoesn'tdoanydamage
Yes! I knew the kiss was going to happen sooner or later! Good job as always :)
Yes! I knew the kiss was going to happen sooner or later! Good job as always :)
2/19/2015 c33
3Caelys
A kiss ! A kiss ! It's too bad she can't going with them to the Future. Amber and Connor were a beautiful couple

A kiss ! A kiss ! It's too bad she can't going with them to the Future. Amber and Connor were a beautiful couple
2/19/2015 c32 Caelys
Cool ! He can used his powers without his robe now :D
By cons , you put the end of the chapter on the Grovyle's POV.
Cool ! He can used his powers without his robe now :D
By cons , you put the end of the chapter on the Grovyle's POV.
2/18/2015 c30
3Caelys
I think she disappear with others. But what is the thing that private Connor of his powers ?

I think she disappear with others. But what is the thing that private Connor of his powers ?
2/18/2015 c28 Caelys
Wow ! They landed in the middle of prehistoric times ! And Mew is there, right ?
Wow ! They landed in the middle of prehistoric times ! And Mew is there, right ?
2/18/2015 c29 swiftattackdoesn'tdoanydamage
Wow, that's interesting... Another human... Good job so far :)
Wow, that's interesting... Another human... Good job so far :)
2/16/2015 c27 Caelys
Finally ! Their relationship is formalized :D
And... Oh ! it's the end of this party, right ? Darkrai will attack them.
Finally ! Their relationship is formalized :D
And... Oh ! it's the end of this party, right ? Darkrai will attack them.
2/16/2015 c26 Caelys
Yet the blow of the nightmare ! And this time for enlist Grovyle. We do not know where to turn with Darkrai ... Suddenly, he is kind and the other time is bad.
Yet the blow of the nightmare ! And this time for enlist Grovyle. We do not know where to turn with Darkrai ... Suddenly, he is kind and the other time is bad.