for In Shadows of Grey8/28/2021 c5 Guest
W O W ! ! ! It was so awesome to get a look into June Monroe - great character development! Although, the face of Emily Blunt kept popping into my mind - she was such a badass in Edge of Tomorrow, just like June. I also greatly enjoyed seeing Aaron at the beginning of his Outcome journey. I realize that you probably don't pay attention to this thread anymore, but I'm leaving this review just in case. Well Done.
W O W ! ! ! It was so awesome to get a look into June Monroe - great character development! Although, the face of Emily Blunt kept popping into my mind - she was such a badass in Edge of Tomorrow, just like June. I also greatly enjoyed seeing Aaron at the beginning of his Outcome journey. I realize that you probably don't pay attention to this thread anymore, but I'm leaving this review just in case. Well Done.
1/17/2016 c4 
10GalInTheMoon
I'm sooo glad you're back to working on this! Great chapter and I can't wait to read what's to come!
10GalInTheMoonI'm sooo glad you're back to working on this! Great chapter and I can't wait to read what's to come!
3/20/2015 c3 EVRyderWriter
Aside from a few grammatical oddities and typos, I applaud your efforts here. A beta and re-reads are a simple fix for those. I have a sinking suspicion we're not going to get another Aaron Cross centered movie. It seems Matt Damon can't stand seeing the Bourne flicks achieve new levels of success without him at the helm, thus Jason Bourne's scheduled return in Bourne 5. If that is the franchise's destiny, I accept it-Damon's Bourne is the epitome of the genre, besides its closest relative in James Bond.
But Jeremy Renner is such a multilayer, multifaceted actor...his Aaron Cross reflects that. THAT is why Legacy was so damn good-you keep that Legacy alive, okay? Deal? Cuz your fanfics, and all the others out there, good or bad, are all we have right now. I mean, bar watching the movie over and over again...really don't have many more options.
Aside from a few grammatical oddities and typos, I applaud your efforts here. A beta and re-reads are a simple fix for those. I have a sinking suspicion we're not going to get another Aaron Cross centered movie. It seems Matt Damon can't stand seeing the Bourne flicks achieve new levels of success without him at the helm, thus Jason Bourne's scheduled return in Bourne 5. If that is the franchise's destiny, I accept it-Damon's Bourne is the epitome of the genre, besides its closest relative in James Bond.
But Jeremy Renner is such a multilayer, multifaceted actor...his Aaron Cross reflects that. THAT is why Legacy was so damn good-you keep that Legacy alive, okay? Deal? Cuz your fanfics, and all the others out there, good or bad, are all we have right now. I mean, bar watching the movie over and over again...really don't have many more options.
3/16/2015 c3 1Darian Clarke
YES! Absolutely wonderful. Aside from a few grammatical and punctuational errors, your writing is truly very, very good. The first lesson comes from out of nowhere, and there is no prep for the young Aaron Cross. He is suddenly thrust into a situation where he is responsible for the life of June Monroe, and he must succeed or she drowns. The tension is going to turn the pool water to jello . . . You capture the inner turmoil and though processes of June and Aaron perfectly, and I can already see him changing into the agent we see in Bourne Legacy. You definitely have me hooked and I cannot wait for the next installment.
You were quite right when you said your story would not be like any others we have read here. :-)
1Darian ClarkeYES! Absolutely wonderful. Aside from a few grammatical and punctuational errors, your writing is truly very, very good. The first lesson comes from out of nowhere, and there is no prep for the young Aaron Cross. He is suddenly thrust into a situation where he is responsible for the life of June Monroe, and he must succeed or she drowns. The tension is going to turn the pool water to jello . . . You capture the inner turmoil and though processes of June and Aaron perfectly, and I can already see him changing into the agent we see in Bourne Legacy. You definitely have me hooked and I cannot wait for the next installment.
You were quite right when you said your story would not be like any others we have read here. :-)
3/16/2015 c3 10GalInTheMoon
Part two? Oh my gosh, yes, please! You've made me hate Outcome and White even more! The tension is killin' me...in a very good way.
10GalInTheMoonPart two? Oh my gosh, yes, please! You've made me hate Outcome and White even more! The tension is killin' me...in a very good way.
3/15/2015 c3 5TheGraceOfCastiel
Goodness...that was really cute. I found it very funny how Aaron couldn't swim. LOL I couldn't stop laughing! I don't know how to swim either...so...yeah. This is very interesting, where its going. Oh...and its good to hear there's still some life in you, Hawkward Russian. *smirks dryly* I hope to hear from you soon.
5TheGraceOfCastielGoodness...that was really cute. I found it very funny how Aaron couldn't swim. LOL I couldn't stop laughing! I don't know how to swim either...so...yeah. This is very interesting, where its going. Oh...and its good to hear there's still some life in you, Hawkward Russian. *smirks dryly* I hope to hear from you soon.
3/12/2015 c2 1Darian Clarke
I just came upon this today, trying to get my twice-weekly Aaron Cross fix. _ All other stories I've read about Aaron Cross fill in "missing" scenes during the movie or speculate about what happens after the movie; yours is the only story I've seen that explains what happened during Kenneth Kitsom's transformation into Aaron Cross. Your writing is very good; it is as if I am there as I read, and your characterizations are well done. Please do come back to this and keep writing it! Thanks.
1Darian ClarkeI just came upon this today, trying to get my twice-weekly Aaron Cross fix. _ All other stories I've read about Aaron Cross fill in "missing" scenes during the movie or speculate about what happens after the movie; yours is the only story I've seen that explains what happened during Kenneth Kitsom's transformation into Aaron Cross. Your writing is very good; it is as if I am there as I read, and your characterizations are well done. Please do come back to this and keep writing it! Thanks.
2/20/2015 c2 10GalInTheMoon
Alright, so I'm late to review, but this was another great chapter! The whole, if he made the right decision, if he had one at all-bit got me. Oomph, good heavy stuff.
10GalInTheMoonAlright, so I'm late to review, but this was another great chapter! The whole, if he made the right decision, if he had one at all-bit got me. Oomph, good heavy stuff.
2/9/2015 c2 5TheGraceOfCastiel
Hehehe. Of course I'll review! Fantastic. The relationship between June and Aaron is heating up in a very nice...simple way. Wonderful chapter!
5TheGraceOfCastielHehehe. Of course I'll review! Fantastic. The relationship between June and Aaron is heating up in a very nice...simple way. Wonderful chapter!
2/8/2015 c1 10GalInTheMoon
I love the idea of digging into the mysterious June Monroe and you've got a great story going so far. Please, please, please keep at it!
10GalInTheMoonI love the idea of digging into the mysterious June Monroe and you've got a great story going so far. Please, please, please keep at it!