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1/21/2015 c2 pocksuppet
Weird, you blocked me for some reason, but I don't remember reviewing any of your stories. Even if I did however, blocking somebody or deleting their review for giving constructive criticism is very immature. These reviews are meant to help you improve, they're not flames.

Why to you keep lapsing into script format every so often? Instead of Jay: Em, I'm really sorry about all this it should be "Em, I'm really sorry about all this," said Jay.

Spike is so ridiculously OOC that it's almost laughable.

And I don't know if you meant for this to be the same character, but it's JOHNNY DiMarco.

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