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1aitor.rosell.torralba
Great! another amazing chapter of Moon in a sharkless sky. will buy you a ko fi.
1aitor.rosell.torralbaGreat! another amazing chapter of Moon in a sharkless sky. will buy you a ko fi.
5/10 c33 fallendemon248
Wow they can have a civilized conversation without trying to kill each other, soifon and ichigo I mean. Still to think yoruichi's brother has surpassed her. I know she's strong but it just goes to show if your not carefully someones gonna tear you down.
Wow they can have a civilized conversation without trying to kill each other, soifon and ichigo I mean. Still to think yoruichi's brother has surpassed her. I know she's strong but it just goes to show if your not carefully someones gonna tear you down.
5/10 c33 27InsaneMakaioshin
1. Yoruichi needs to be more objective.
2. When are they going to investigate Kenji? He seems too eager to play them off each other.
27InsaneMakaioshin1. Yoruichi needs to be more objective.
2. When are they going to investigate Kenji? He seems too eager to play them off each other.
3/26 c32 1aitor.rosell.torralba
I re-readed to put myself up to date. btw you mentioned in one chapter that the horn of salvation is less cool than the form ichigo used vs Ulquiorra... but those two are not comparable, the full hollow form is essentially a Resurrección on everything but name, while the horn of salvation is the equivalent of the visored mask, it looks like a mask fragment because Ichigo sealed his hollow powers(among the others) inside a zanpakuto when he forged true Zangetsu, that is what arrancar do, so ofc his "hollow mask" now is a mask fragment like an arrancar. In fact chances are that he now could have a Resurrección and his Resurrección would most likely look either like the form he used vs ulquiorra or similar. At least that is my read in the horn of salvation situation, that it is just his new "hollow mask".
Talking about your story... You should make them brainwashed quincycar pesche and dondochaca instead of killing them off, but make them so hilariously incompetent that they are a danger for the quincies, maybe one low level sterneitter dies off from friendly fire from those two, it would be hilarious.
1aitor.rosell.torralbaI re-readed to put myself up to date. btw you mentioned in one chapter that the horn of salvation is less cool than the form ichigo used vs Ulquiorra... but those two are not comparable, the full hollow form is essentially a Resurrección on everything but name, while the horn of salvation is the equivalent of the visored mask, it looks like a mask fragment because Ichigo sealed his hollow powers(among the others) inside a zanpakuto when he forged true Zangetsu, that is what arrancar do, so ofc his "hollow mask" now is a mask fragment like an arrancar. In fact chances are that he now could have a Resurrección and his Resurrección would most likely look either like the form he used vs ulquiorra or similar. At least that is my read in the horn of salvation situation, that it is just his new "hollow mask".
Talking about your story... You should make them brainwashed quincycar pesche and dondochaca instead of killing them off, but make them so hilariously incompetent that they are a danger for the quincies, maybe one low level sterneitter dies off from friendly fire from those two, it would be hilarious.
2/27 c1 Guest
Great update! Was worried the story wouldn't get to finish
Great update! Was worried the story wouldn't get to finish
2/5 c4 CapriSunnyD
I’m sorry, did you just have Ichigo struggle against Tia? The Ichigo that kill Aizen is struggling with someone that is literal leagues below even Ulquiorra? Look I can suspend disbelief for something’s, but that is just ridiculous. And this is the revised story? Did you have him outright lose in the original or something?
I’m sorry, did you just have Ichigo struggle against Tia? The Ichigo that kill Aizen is struggling with someone that is literal leagues below even Ulquiorra? Look I can suspend disbelief for something’s, but that is just ridiculous. And this is the revised story? Did you have him outright lose in the original or something?
1/19 c1 SilentOmen0
Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "The Shark in the Moonless Night" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
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Hi, I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading your "The Shark in the Moonless Night" The title immediately caught my attention, but the story itself went beyond all my expectations. Your storytelling is outstanding, and the characters are incredibly well developed. As I finished reading, I couldn’t help but imagine how amazing this story would look as a comic. The more I thought about it, the more convinced I became that it would shine in that format. A little about me I’m a professional artist specializing in a range of styles, and I work on commission. If you're interested, I’d love to discuss the idea of adapting your story into a comic. Feel free to reach out to me through email, Discord, or Twitter.
Discord: goldendraws
Email:
Twitter: GoldenArtDraws
1/13 c32 fallendemon248
Damn so many plotlines moving, the ancients are becoming more active, yoruichi is finally gonna tell ichigo and tia whats happening with her family, and the quincys are beginning to send out scouts.
Damn so many plotlines moving, the ancients are becoming more active, yoruichi is finally gonna tell ichigo and tia whats happening with her family, and the quincys are beginning to send out scouts.
1/12 c32 ulttoanova
I really think the wall and the whole other squad is a dumb idea... Zero Squad was enough of an ass pull since they should have gotten involved with Aizen given his goal involved the soul king but this whole wall thing makes no sense even with how convoluted Bleach can be. That said I like seeing the Wandereich getting involved and seeing some OC Sternritters isn't bad, I hope you focus more on the Quincies instead of the wall.
I really think the wall and the whole other squad is a dumb idea... Zero Squad was enough of an ass pull since they should have gotten involved with Aizen given his goal involved the soul king but this whole wall thing makes no sense even with how convoluted Bleach can be. That said I like seeing the Wandereich getting involved and seeing some OC Sternritters isn't bad, I hope you focus more on the Quincies instead of the wall.
1/12 c32 10Dre17
glad to see you updating again I love the original story and I'm glad to see the story going to hopefully get finished
10Dre17glad to see you updating again I love the original story and I'm glad to see the story going to hopefully get finished
1/12 c32 27InsaneMakaioshin
1, Between Yhwach and the ancients, they are between a rock and a hard place.
2. Are we sure that her brother is the culprit?
3. We’re almost caught up to where the old one ended. Will he reboot it again? Come & find out.
27InsaneMakaioshin1, Between Yhwach and the ancients, they are between a rock and a hard place.
2. Are we sure that her brother is the culprit?
3. We’re almost caught up to where the old one ended. Will he reboot it again? Come & find out.