for Hermione Granger and the Serpent's Renaissance5/20 c77 ruth hammond
I do not worry about the bears but the mosquitos and the wood wasps! Hope you enjoyed yourselves when you were there...
I do not worry about the bears but the mosquitos and the wood wasps! Hope you enjoyed yourselves when you were there...
5/19 c61 ruth hammond
Can't wait...It is 3:35 am and the lights are almost out and trying to type... sorry if this doesn't read clearly will try to clean it up in the am, if not, sorry!
Mind not working clearly, trying to say, looking forward without peaking to see what is coming. Have been enjoying story, thank you...
Can't wait...It is 3:35 am and the lights are almost out and trying to type... sorry if this doesn't read clearly will try to clean it up in the am, if not, sorry!
Mind not working clearly, trying to say, looking forward without peaking to see what is coming. Have been enjoying story, thank you...
5/17 c50 ruth hammond
The bogart part was fine, not too much and not too little. I'm afraid that I am some what lost, probably because I am trying to do Hermione's life with out the time turner...no sleep and too much to do. Its 2:10 am and my brain is scrambled...
About the last chapter and your question about the right balance of too much emotion and too little 's funny because I was thinking when the chapter was heading to the ending that it was well done...! [Big Smile!]
The bogart part was fine, not too much and not too little. I'm afraid that I am some what lost, probably because I am trying to do Hermione's life with out the time turner...no sleep and too much to do. Its 2:10 am and my brain is scrambled...
About the last chapter and your question about the right balance of too much emotion and too little 's funny because I was thinking when the chapter was heading to the ending that it was well done...! [Big Smile!]
5/14 c24 ruth hammond
One of the harder things that writers face it to know when to close a chapter when it is time and now try to drag it on and drive their readers away. Good work with this chapter.
One of the harder things that writers face it to know when to close a chapter when it is time and now try to drag it on and drive their readers away. Good work with this chapter.
5/14 c20 ruth hammond
You write a wonderful Hagrid! Sounds just as guilty as we did when we were kids and in trouble! HEHEHE You are doing a good job with your characters.
You write a wonderful Hagrid! Sounds just as guilty as we did when we were kids and in trouble! HEHEHE You are doing a good job with your characters.
5/13 c13 ruth hammond
Re. this last AN. Here, here! I do not know if there is a story that I have read that mixed Ron and Hermione that I could stand...
Re. this last AN. Here, here! I do not know if there is a story that I have read that mixed Ron and Hermione that I could stand...
5/13 c12 ruth hammond
Re. Top of chapter AN.
Good thing to do when you do not know what to do with something. I have seen too many writers keep trying to make something fit and make a MESS! [An OLD advanced writing teacher!] I must say that I am really enjoying your writing. Thank you.
Too bad we do not follow the old ways of speaking to others until given permission to call them by their first names.
Re. Top of chapter AN.
Good thing to do when you do not know what to do with something. I have seen too many writers keep trying to make something fit and make a MESS! [An OLD advanced writing teacher!] I must say that I am really enjoying your writing. Thank you.
Too bad we do not follow the old ways of speaking to others until given permission to call them by their first names.
4/24 c14 ruth hammond
Have to go to bed before the sun is up and I have to finish the laundry and packing for a week's camping and fishing. Steve has started planting the garden...tomatoes, several kinds of onions [ a variety of dry onions called Candy and they are the very best, last a long time with the very best flavor with little spoilage, imagine have the onions in the basement that are fresh in the last part of February!] Anyway, I sit here thinking of what we can do with them in a couple of months. Steve's first in a half inch slice on a hamburger and I think of a big bowl of Potato Salad without the sore stomach! Anyway, I am sitting here thinking of cooking and really enjoying the chapter and along comes Edmund, what a fun conversation. Thank you for your writing!
Have to go to bed before the sun is up and I have to finish the laundry and packing for a week's camping and fishing. Steve has started planting the garden...tomatoes, several kinds of onions [ a variety of dry onions called Candy and they are the very best, last a long time with the very best flavor with little spoilage, imagine have the onions in the basement that are fresh in the last part of February!] Anyway, I sit here thinking of what we can do with them in a couple of months. Steve's first in a half inch slice on a hamburger and I think of a big bowl of Potato Salad without the sore stomach! Anyway, I am sitting here thinking of cooking and really enjoying the chapter and along comes Edmund, what a fun conversation. Thank you for your writing!
3/16 c30 acowles02
Just make lockheart get a big head over his new “teaching” and do something stupid. Like vanishing Harry’s arm.
Just make lockheart get a big head over his new “teaching” and do something stupid. Like vanishing Harry’s arm.
2/18 c98 Guest
This story is a delight. This is the third time I've reread it. Would love to read the next year once it's posted (and hoping it's not abandoned!)
This story is a delight. This is the third time I've reread it. Would love to read the next year once it's posted (and hoping it's not abandoned!)
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