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2/11/2015 c14 1gaara king of the sand
and the plot thickens _ i'm starting to like this more and more i wounder what you have in store for the next chapter whatever it is i can't wait to see it update again soon till next message bye
2/11/2015 c14 suganya
Gd job... Keep going
2/11/2015 c14 Queen Louise
This story is absolutely amazing, to the point where I have very few criticisms. The views shown of both Slytherins and Gryffindors are seen in a less stereotypical light, Hermione's adult eyes allow her greater insights into the stone situation and the actions of her classmates as well as various adults, and the pacing as well as the plot line are sensible, interesting without dragging things out or rushing them. Just a few things—there are extra insights in to Draco and Neville's behavior in relation to their families and upbringing that would add depth to the story and help in keeping their development later on more understandable; Dean Thomas is a Muggleborn, not a half blood or a pure blood, at least as far as we know in canon, as his father has been absentee since he was an infant, therefore Daphne would be more likely to know Neville, Parvarti and Padma, and Lavender Brown, as all of them come from good standing and were raised in magical households; finally, Hermione would likely have attracted a few Ravenclaws and possibly a few Hufflepuffs by repeatedly running study sessions with a non-hostile Slytherin, and by allowing open entry to students willing to learn and get along from multiple houses, especially at their age, she would be on her way to achieving her goal of improving inter-house cooperation and communication.
2/11/2015 c14 Camrret1
I love, love, love this story. So refreshing and a real delight to see harry potter from this very particular Hermione, i wonder do you plan on making this story go trough all the books and if so can i make a request? Please do not make her end up with Ron! Keep up the good work!
2/10/2015 c13 2Lovina Rossi-Vargas
Yes! Please read it, Harry!
2/10/2015 c13 Guest
Wow! Love your story, it's amazing. I like the way how you made Salazar a nice and smart person. Love it all!
2/10/2015 c13 Guest
Did Hermione miss the whole 'After a good beating' bit by Harry? How is that not an attempt to injure him permanently? She should have been alarmed at that comment, especially if Harry can speak of it so casually!
Other than that, good chapter.
2/10/2015 c13 109Ebenbild
Was it Sally who wrote the book title in there? After all I am sure she does not want to be declared evil and to make Harry curious it would be the best method...
In your story, are there Horcruxes? Is Harry still just a Parselmouth because of the soul piece in his head? But he is related to Peverell... so did the ability just not come out in the generations before?
Please continue soon. I really am curious how you proceed.
Ebenbild
2/10/2015 c13 Gwenlynn
When i read the summary i decided to give this story a go since the concept was one i had not read before. I applaud the writer for making this work. Sally has a plan, she manages to remain true to AO Hermione without interrupting Harry's AO story to much by her pressence. I loved the Troll scene for example. Bloody Gryffindor kids and their meddling recklessness
2/10/2015 c13 1angel897
interesting to read liked it
2/9/2015 c13 1gaara king of the sand
_ HM vary interesting i can see what your doing at least i think i do your trying to teach harry that not everything you hear is completely true if i'm right i think i get a cookey

also i hope you have Hermione revile herself to Harry as Salazer Slytherin it'd likely be a little edgy at first but i do look forward to it none-the-less well till next message bye
2/6/2015 c12 NatNicole
This fic is bloody AWESOME!
2/6/2015 c12 1angel897
a most interesting and enjoyable, thrilling story to read love it! and love to read more so please keep writing kay
2/6/2015 c12 tih.brandt
So short, but so good xD
Please, keep updating, I'm anxious to read more.
One per day would be so good huahuahauh
But seriously, with each chapter it gets more and more interesting, I love it.
2/6/2015 c12 1gaara king of the sand
It's Great to see such a Story like this it's rare that i find a story that i find a Story that i will read who's main character isn't Harry and I've liked your story so far though it's still too close to Canon i hope you move away from it more until the line that is Canon and AU are crossed as i love Canon but i also love a good story that is all it's own update again soon please till next message bye
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