10/30/2020 c2 Feminist
There is also a song called last kiss by taylor swift. Its in the speak now album. Listen to it, its calming, but good.
There is also a song called last kiss by taylor swift. Its in the speak now album. Listen to it, its calming, but good.
10/30/2020 c1 Feminist
I noticed you spelt si instead of she, and that could just be a normal grammar mistake from typing too fast, but i was wondering if you speak spanish. I speak spanish, and my autocorrect always autocorrect words to si, so, yeah. Just wondering... if you do speak spanish, where are you from? Or did you just learn the language but have generally no latin backround. Btw, im mexican. Good work writing your story. Best of luck for future references!
I noticed you spelt si instead of she, and that could just be a normal grammar mistake from typing too fast, but i was wondering if you speak spanish. I speak spanish, and my autocorrect always autocorrect words to si, so, yeah. Just wondering... if you do speak spanish, where are you from? Or did you just learn the language but have generally no latin backround. Btw, im mexican. Good work writing your story. Best of luck for future references!
12/9/2015 c1 Karrie
It is an awesome start but you need to do more and keep developing the story. I like that you saved Tris and just injured her.
It is an awesome start but you need to do more and keep developing the story. I like that you saved Tris and just injured her.
8/17/2015 c12 Guest
Third review in a row... 86 reviews? 4x28 and Tris6 I see what you did there. Keep updating! This fanfic is amazing!
-Jennifer
Third review in a row... 86 reviews? 4x28 and Tris6 I see what you did there. Keep updating! This fanfic is amazing!
-Jennifer
8/17/2015 c11 Guest
PLOT TWIST OMG.
*tear rolls down face* me: WHO HAZ ONIONS?!
PLOT TWIST OMG.
*tear rolls down face* me: WHO HAZ ONIONS?!
8/17/2015 c10 Guest
IF I STAYYYYYY I read the book, cried. Watched the movie, cried. Perfect for the fanfic, cuz Mia is in a coma after an accident and stuff.
MAY THE DIVERGENT KITTY FANGIRLING COMMENCE: And this fanfic is amazing and DIVERGENT KITTY IS QUEEN. I swear, Trisara, you need to let me in on you secret of pure Nyan-Cat epicness.
Bai
-Jennifer :)
IF I STAYYYYYY I read the book, cried. Watched the movie, cried. Perfect for the fanfic, cuz Mia is in a coma after an accident and stuff.
MAY THE DIVERGENT KITTY FANGIRLING COMMENCE: And this fanfic is amazing and DIVERGENT KITTY IS QUEEN. I swear, Trisara, you need to let me in on you secret of pure Nyan-Cat epicness.
Bai
-Jennifer :)
8/14/2015 c12 cristina
so i really like it but right now i am so scared that tris will not go back to four they where a really good pair
so i really like it but right now i am so scared that tris will not go back to four they where a really good pair
8/15/2015 c1 Soupremacy
I've only read the first chapter, but please update as soon as you can, because I already lov this fanfic, and I already cried. So please update soon,
I've only read the first chapter, but please update as soon as you can, because I already lov this fanfic, and I already cried. So please update soon,
8/15/2015 c12 6Divergent Kitty
Yay! Christina's family time! :3 It's not often that writers give the spotlight to another character other than the main ones, so this is good. Don't worry about the delays, as long as you don't stress out about this! Keep up the good work, Ash! :D
Divergent Kitty
Yay! Christina's family time! :3 It's not often that writers give the spotlight to another character other than the main ones, so this is good. Don't worry about the delays, as long as you don't stress out about this! Keep up the good work, Ash! :D
Divergent Kitty
6/24/2015 c11 Divergent Kitty
Damn Trissycorn, calm ya tits.
Ouch doe... Can't imagine the pain that poor Chrissy and Toby are going through... ;-;
Divergent Kitty
Damn Trissycorn, calm ya tits.
Ouch doe... Can't imagine the pain that poor Chrissy and Toby are going through... ;-;
Divergent Kitty
6/16/2015 c11 Swagger
I like the chapter. I can't wait for the more frequent updates.
I like the chapter. I can't wait for the more frequent updates.
6/16/2015 c7 Swagger
Yay! You fixed the repeat chapter!
Yay! You fixed the repeat chapter!